May the Odds Be Ever in Your Favor - Comments

ThingsNeverChange (100)

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This is a great story :) It's an interesting take on the original.

February 22nd, 2011 at 10:23pm

CaribbeanConquerer (100)

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LOVE this so far. Update soon please!!! :D

January 31st, 2011 at 02:44am

KittenRawr (100)

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i like it
if you're intreseted I'd like to co author, but only if you want that

January 28th, 2011 at 01:48am

nicolecullen (100)

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I really liked it :)

January 27th, 2011 at 09:49pm

Izzyrm121 (100)

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A couple grammar mistakes, and you were a little repetitive, but other than that, I loved your descriptions. You have talent. I subscribed. I hope you continue, and if you need anyone to beta-read, I will definitely volunteer. GREAT JOB!!! :)

January 27th, 2011 at 07:14pm