A couple grammar mistakes, and you were a little repetitive, but other than that, I loved your descriptions. You have talent. I subscribed. I hope you continue, and if you need anyone to beta-read, I will definitely volunteer. GREAT JOB!!! :)
January 27th, 2011 at 07:14pm
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