Into Your Arms - Comments

Marleyyyy....
it's been a while. I'm not sure if you remember me or not. Or even get on here anymore for that matter. Sigh...
But, hi!! This story and its prequel seriously have me by the heartstrings. It's sooo good, and really emotional and heartbreaking and loving and just... gah. I've recently gotten into reading ATL fan fics and stumbled across your story, here, and I really love it. It's seriously great, and has a more original concept in comparison to other ATL fics... like, just the fact that the main character, Jasey, is a baseball player. Like what? I've never seen that done before, so kudos.
I'm sad to see this was never continued though. Although I guess I can't talk much on the unfinished stories concept. You are such a great writer! I just wanted to leave a comment here because it's been so long since we last talked, and just to leave some feedback because this story deserves it! You seriously did such a great job with it. The POV switch kind of confused me (it went from being in first person to a sort of third), and there were also various other names for the main character put in (Isabella, Minnie, being just two that I saw) but those were probably just accidentally not switched back to the original name, lol. So no big deal.
But yeah, Idk if you'll ever see this comment, probably not, but I just wanted to leave feedback letting you know I truly enjoyed what you have of this, and maybe someday, if inspiration strikes you, you will continue? Maybe? I hope so...
But if it doesn't, I can understand that too, cause it's definitely happened to me.
But yeah, this is a great story you had going on here. I'm so sorry I never read it when you were still frequently updating, I wasn't really into ATL back then, but I am now, and so I'm just going through and reading different stories on here.
I hope you're well girl. <3

Please keep updating! I'm rooting for Alex though!!

Aw they totally need to get back together! But poor wee Jacky :(... and Destery, oaft :P

update this! i wanna see her with alex!

I love this story! I wish you'd update. :(

please update soon!!!!!! i love love love this story and i want to see who she ends up with (i hope its jack) please soon!!!!!!!!!!

Love it, so happy you updated <3

Awh:( I'm so glad you updated but this chapter made me sad :---( I want Alex and Jasey back together soon! Pleaseeeeee update this soooon! I looove this! I hope they make it:-)

pleasepleaseplease update <3

aww i loved thiis chapter!!

love the update :D

I love that she wore Alex's necklace (and of course the ATL shirt). I still have hope they get back together. Amazing chapter, update soon please, <3

This is such a great friggin story!! I'm so glad you did a sequal!

ALSO: Okay, I'm really sad. I was like half asleep, and thought of this, so I had to get back on.. Wow.. :P

so anyways: You should have some scene where she finds the owl necklace alex got her. idunno, its your story, i just thought id share. lulz okay. :D

Well- A few things:
1. DEF ALEX AND JASEY I like kay, i sound like a retard, but i spent ALL night reading Jasey Rae, and I started at 6:42 CST. It's now 11:18. FIVE HOURS. It's an amazing story, but I like FREAKED when Jack and Jasey kissed for the first time, I don't know, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE Jack's character, but something about Alex and Jasey in this story..

2. I LOVE THE BLACK PARADE

3. Destrey is hawt<3

4. UPDATE SOOOON<3 Make this an amazing ass story, because I know you can!

(I'm such a fangirl..haha )

i really like this story!!
i definately wana see jasey give a chance to jack and be in a short relationship with him and maybe they can kinda realize they werent meant for each other
butt ultimately alex and jasey should be together at the end :)

Alex And Jasey!!!

Alex and Jasey ftw

Alex and Jasey, those two are meant to be together. Love the chapter, please update soon <3

love the update :D
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