Born and Broken Every Single Time. - Comments

Sequel?
:D I absolutely loved reading this story.
Amazing work!

Loved it.

Well done.

Oh my god. That's so amazing.
I love it!! <3

So I just read your whole fucking story.
I'm literally pouring tears out from my eyes.
I was listening to 'Miserable At Best' by Mayday Parade on repeat...
Oh God I'm so depressed right now.
That was brilliant.
But now I need to read a happy Frerard, this shit is depressing as hell.

great ending

Briiliant ending, I've loved this story so much. I loved Gerards leaving present for Frank.
I'm really sorry to hear this was your story but really happy to know you are doing good now.
xoxo

Hm, I've been a 'shy' reader, if you will, since the story started...but I'm just now commenting.
Haha, anyway, the story was wonderful, I loved it dearly.
The last chapter made me cry a bit, I'm not gonna lie.
But only goood stories make me cry.
So kudos to you.
<333
xxx
lindsay.

Heath, you have excelled yourself! This is a perfect end to an amazing story. Of course, you know how much I love this story and even though I'm sad to see it go, it's such an optimistic ending. Just because something physically ends in your life doesn't mean that it ends all together. I actually cried at this ending; because I feel like I've watched the characters grow and evolve and made them my friends. I've followed their ups and downs from the very start; much like MCR themselves.

I love the author's note on the last chapter; a very fitting monologue that needed to be there.

I love you and love your stories, especially this one!

To end is to begin - NO REGRETS!

:hug:

OMFG!!! amazingstory an awesomeend it was sooo sweet and sadluved the whole thing!!

PS- PAGE CLAIM! =]

This was absolutely stunning, there are no words to describe how well this was written.
And I don't know exactly what you went through, but one of my closest friends is going through this same exact thing and it really touched me to read this as if it were her. I used to have the outlook where they would say, "Oh yeah, I don't eat, I'm too fat" and I'd tell them to suck it up because they were trying to get some type of sympathy out of it-
But my friend never did, she has an honest to god problem, and until now, I never really understood how big of a problem it was.
And I wanted to thank you for opening a door for me, so to speak, haha.
You're wonderful.
<3

This is what he spoke about, I had to let go and at this time, it wasn’t just mentally, but physically too.

that was my favorite line out the entire ending chapter....i'm not sure why, it just was, it's just a simple statement but it holds so much more meaning than that.

i don't think you could've ended this story in any other way, it truly was a beautiful story to read, very well done i must say...your talent for writing is amazing and thank you for that message--honestly, i'd have never picked that out unless you pointed it out.

well done! =]

xxpoisonluvx:

omgod.
this made me pull an all-nighter reading everything.
thank you soo much the story was unbelievably amazing!
it was such a perfect ending with a twist that made something so sad seem slightly happier :]
thank you again. the story really did have a meaningful purpose <3

i agree the ending was absolutly wounderful

omgod.
this made me pull an all-nighter reading everything.
thank you soo much the story was unbelievably amazing!
it was such a perfect ending with a twist that made something so sad seem slightly happier :]
thank you again. the story really did have a meaningful purpose <3

that was the perfect ending i love that story one of my favorits out of all the stories ive read that was one of the best i know about that whole eating disorder thing cause i think i have it to cause my mom and grandmother think im inerexic but if im not hungry i gag every tiem i even try to take a biteand i ouke sometimes when i fource myself to i ahte people thinking in inerexic ive gone days without food before

That was the perfect ending to such an amazing story.
It said everything, pulled on my heart strings and left me with a huge grin on my face.

Thank you for writing this story, it's been so amazing - quality update after quality update ^_^

All My Love
Beth
xoxo

This was beautiful.
It was precious and it was perfect.
The author's note was really brave of you , as well.
And you left nothing unfinished.
Amazing story.

dude, i dont think i have commented befroe but i have been reading it from chapter 1 an dthe reason i have not commeted is because i am lazy. But now im sad because i dont want it to end ):
it was such a great story and i loved it.

Wow! Great story. I am very impressed!

Oh god. Damn you for making me cry.

This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time.

I think the emotion in it was amazing too. Just...

Wow. I loved it :)

xx