Born and Broken Every Single Time. - Comments

that chapter was an amazing filler...it was like our goodbye before the final goodbye...almost...in a sense.

Even though I agree that 'Look At This Photograph' is a bit of a filler, it's still a great chapter and very well written. It seems like you're practically finished with this now, which is a shame, but it needs closure and I think you know that too. This is purely constructive, not bad criticism; you know how much I love your stories. Oh and btw, love the first chapter of your new story. I popped your comment cherry on that one.

Love ya hun - mwah, mwah, mwwwaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Aw, nice chapter.x

awwwwwwwwwww thats sweet of mikey

OMG I have the PERFECT song to go with this story. It's by a really bad band, i know (sorry if anyone likes them), but the lyrics are just so suited!

http://youtube.com/watch?v=O7J32oS2u3Q
Okay, it's by Busted and it's called When Day Turns Into Night.

Please just forget who it's by and listen to the lyrics because it would go REALLY well with the story!!!

good thing frankie dind tabuse what his parents are doig for him

Noooo this story can never end!!! I've just spent the last like FOREVER (well like 4 hours) reading this from the beginning!! It's soooo good!
Update soon?

Can't wait for new story too! You're a very talented writer!

=]

Great update, I'll be sorry to see this story end too.
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I can't wait for your new story, but it'll be sad to see this one go. You've really written a great story here Heath. I seriously cannot even begin to tell you just how much I have enjoyed this story. It's the final countdown.

I'll Miss You Babe is the epitomy of cheesy love, but who gives a flying fuck; yet again, a triumph of a chapter Heath! OMFG, I just so want everything to work out between them so badly. Love it, love it, love you!

I really can't quite understand why you don't like To Be Real mate. Ok, it's a short chapter, but it's much needed; the reader needed Frank to finally confront Gee and for Gee to relax and just enjoy the time he has with his loved ones. Personally, I think this chapter is fab and it's so much more then a filler!

Love ya my little chickadee!

OMFG, OMFG, OOMMMMFFFFFGGGGGG! Never Look Back is so heartwrenchingly amazing it hurts! Why doesn't Frank just bite the bullet, swallow his pride and ask Gee if he can go with him?! I'm far too bloody involved with this story for my own good. If it was real' I'd march up to the pair of them, give em a good slap and tell them to sort this out! Cor blimey.

LOVE IT!

OMFG - This Is The Best Day Ever (38) really is an amazing chapter!

Extremely well written as always and jam-packed full of emotion. You know hun, I'm really not the greatest fan of Frerard, but I love your writing. I think it's the fact that the relationship you depict between Gee and Frank can count on so many different levels and anyone who's ever been in love can relate to it regardless of sexual orientation.

Love as always

Lucy

Awwh, that was adorable.
I think ... They should test out Frank's bed.
You know ... Break it in again.
It's been so long since he's slept in it. ;)

sweet update

I had the BIGGEST smile on my face while reading the end of the chappie! :]
It was an awesome chapter I must say, Im all happy inside now xD
Loved the chapter :D
Update soon please!

Aww, great update.
I loved Gerard writing the lyrics, it was a lovely moment.
I'm happy things seem to be going well so far for Frank back home.
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Brilliant update, really sweet.
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That was the cutest chapter I have ever read..:]
I almost had tears in my eyes! >.<
God the chappie when they leave is going to be so sad! D:
Please update soon! :]

DUDE, MORE!?