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  • TheseAreTheNights

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    amazing. more soon?
    April 10th, 2008 at 03:43am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    oh no....part of me is like suck it up princess, it's not like you'll never see him again and part of me is like, this is horrible! they're going to get sad and that's going to effect everything else and then my mind goes in lots of directions.....more when you can please?! =]
    April 9th, 2008 at 01:21am
  • Romanticide

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    :(
    Aww...nuuuu!
    He doesnt have to go xD
    I loved the chappies, the second one was sad though D:
    Poor Frank...
    Update soon :3
    April 8th, 2008 at 11:21pm
  • lisablackrose

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    Don't hate it, I didn't. :)

    I found that chapter really sad, just thinking about what Frank has to go back to at home, I very much doubt things will have improved, at least MIkey will be there for him, he won't completely be alone after Gerard has gone.

    Nice update.x
    April 8th, 2008 at 11:06pm
  • mutiny.

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    i thought this chapter was wonderful.
    glad that gerard isn't being a giant douche anymore.
    =D
    April 8th, 2008 at 06:58am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    Cry that was touching....this was my favorite part:

    He stared at me thoughtfully for a moment before making my heart fucking burst. He leaned towards me and pressed his lips to mine. It was only brief, seemingly just a thank you but it was more than I needed. I got through to him. I actually got through the exterior and struck a chord in him. He rested his forehead against mine and just looked at me. I smiled as I looked back, realising as he looked he didn’t just see, he understood.

    seriously, i cannot wait for more, this story is amazing! In Love
    April 8th, 2008 at 05:43am
  • lisablackrose

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    DUH!!! Sorry.x
    April 7th, 2008 at 11:49pm
  • lisablackrose

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    Aww, I'm happy they have sorted things out.
    Nice update.x
    April 7th, 2008 at 11:48pm
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    Aww, I'm happy they have sorted things out.
    Nice update.x
    April 7th, 2008 at 11:47pm
  • Kelsea.mp3

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    THANK GOD FRANKIE!
    Finally knocked some sense in to Gee,
    fucking hell he was being stubborn
    and stoooopiddddd.
    Loooveed that chapter seriously!
    UPDATE SOON. (:
    April 7th, 2008 at 11:34pm
  • lisablackrose

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    "A kid?" I repeated, feeling numb inside. I remember the first time he said that to me we were arguing. How in time we turned the remark into something we’d giggle over. But now, as he said that to me, staring at me through his tearstained eyes I knew this wasn’t to humour me. He was serious, and worst of all he was right.

    "One day you’ll learn that leaving is just as hard as being left behind," he stated calmly.


    That has to be one of THE BEST quotes ever, just wow.
    That whole section is just amazingly written, your an amazing aurthur >.<
    I loved these chappies :D
    Please update soon :3
    I really couldn't have put it better myself. Brilliant.x
    April 7th, 2008 at 11:43am
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    "A kid?" I repeated, feeling numb inside. I remember the first time he said that to me we were arguing. How in time we turned the remark into something we’d giggle over. But now, as he said that to me, staring at me through his tearstained eyes I knew this wasn’t to humour me. He was serious, and worst of all he was right.

    "One day you’ll learn that leaving is just as hard as being left behind," he stated calmly.


    That has to be one of THE BEST quotes ever, just wow.
    That whole section is just amazingly written, your an amazing aurthur >.<
    I loved these chappies :D
    Please update soon :3
    April 7th, 2008 at 02:44am
  • Alice Verney

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    awww poor frankie and mikey
    April 7th, 2008 at 01:26am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    i love the friendship mikey and frank have...it's like my own with my best friend...we can just chill in each other's presence, content in not talking and we can talk about anything/everything/nothing, it can be serious or not and we've had our moments where our friendship's been tested....that was a great chapter! i seriously hope frank goes and tells gerard that he understands now!
    April 7th, 2008 at 12:41am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    that was a beautiful chapter...the emotions present....it broke my heart reading the beginnings of their distancing...and gerard's not even gone yet?! wow...can't wait for more! =]
    April 6th, 2008 at 05:00am
  • Alice Verney

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    poor frankie and gee
    April 6th, 2008 at 02:42am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    i seriously hope gerard did that in the whole cliche moment, where he had to brush it off as if it were nothing because he knows if he didn't do it now it'd be too hard later....wow that makes no sense, my apologies! =|

    i want to say poor frankie because that's what my mind is pretty much telling me to do but at the same time i'm like poor gerard...i think there's more to him than what he's leading on just then...i think this is as painful for him as it is for frankie, if not more....can't wait for the next update!
    April 5th, 2008 at 03:29am
  • Kelsea.mp3

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    Ohmygosh, that's sooo fucked up.
    Gee is such an ass, he could've atleast be sad but happy at the same time about leaving.
    He's sucha dick, i hate him again!?
    Goshhhh, update sooooooonnnnn!!!!!
    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE please.<3
    April 4th, 2008 at 09:15pm
  • Romanticide

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    D:
    Poor Frank, it took him guts to do what he did :]
    Your chapters are awesomeness :D
    I feel bad for him having to deal with evyrhintg and stuff :/
    Please update soon :]
    March 30th, 2008 at 10:00pm
  • crazy.beautiful

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    Cry i feel so bad for frank in this chapter...just for everything he's dealing with--all at once it seems too. that's got to be a tough choice, choosing to stand up to your mother, your own flesh and blood; but she does need to get better before she can be his mother again. if i wasn't still in awe of that chapter i'd say something more interesting than this but alas, i could be here a while if i did that. can't wait for more! In Love
    March 28th, 2008 at 05:24am