If You're Mine - Comments

thank youuu for updating!!!!!!

Please, please, please update <3

hey there amazing writer. you should update soon. cuzzz im hooked to this story =)

This story is really just amazing.. It's so well written that I read it and I feel like I'm there! I was sad to find out that it's on hiatus :( Please update soon!

Michelle is so fiercely protective, it's beautiful!
Nagging is yet to come, as I have to leave my house now :(

But danke for the update :) I enjoyed it. Especially, strangely, the bit about the laser on the snow and Will's wings. They were both such small bits but they were so perfect that I could see them in my mind and felt almost like I was there. So thank you :) <3

Awh I love Will :)

Awh I love Will :)

I really like this story it’s different and I have no idea where you’re heading with the plot and I love that. Your story is really well written and your characters are really likeable. I have to admit I was a bit confused on the last chapter to whose P.O.V it was but I’m really glad we got to meet a new character. I can’t wait to see where you go with this story and where you take the characters.

I like the way you wrote this story. It's not exactly an origanal plot, but I can already tell that it's going to be different, in a way. So props to you, for being able to take something unoriganal, and make it your own. Kinda like how the cowboy took the sombreros and made cowboy hats :D

ay badabing! new chapter! it kinda confused me at first tho O.o

That is so weird 7 out of my 14 brothers and sisters have the same names as the people in this story and one has my name! Are you sure don't know me? Oh and lol that is the same reaction my Mom got when she decided to go back to work to be a teacher, all 14 of us plus are dad where like WHAT THE HELL!!!! So this is hilarious to me.lol

Carmie is the manager (even more sucky word!) of the orphanage. She owns the orphanage and the government helps to fund everything.

Yes, thank you for those mistakes-- please do nagg, I appreciate it all immensely. <3

I'll own, I'm rather thrown. I am unsure as to her mode of living- is Carmie the foster mother or does she just... I don't know, oversee (awful choice) look after the kids in a foster home?
It has been nagging at me.

But, enough of that. I liked the chapter, although I spotted a few mistakes which I shall, at a later date, bitch about. Sorry for being a sucky reader/fangirl of yours recently. I have no excuse, I'm just an ass. But I'm hopping over to give love to Lex and Leap of Faith; I've missed them all, and I've missed you.

whoo microwave clock! O.o well tht was kinda weird. anyway, awesome chapter!

Such a sweet story, i wanna see where it goes

I looove this story. update more please ^_^ <3 <3 <3

I've posted this story before, and I had maybe a hundred comments, four hundred readers, two hundred subscribers-- but I took it down for editing and ta-dahhhh! ;D

I started reading the first chapter then got confused. i feel like i already read this???

Weeew. I love this! It's really beautiful.
Keep up the good work. :)

This is insanely good, i agree with plan to live forever, not a lot of angel stories are good but yours is defenetily the exception :D update!!