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  • Xx-fairywings-xX

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    Whaha, great update:)
    I love Karima:D.
    She seems so nice and bubbly:)
    February 16th, 2011 at 09:37am
  • My.Brutal.Romance

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    Thank you for making such an original story! I'm so tired of the same old thing. I hope you update soon!!!
    February 16th, 2011 at 09:22am
  • Xx-fairywings-xX

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    Whaha, Ulric was supposed to be the Alpha?
    How come you haven;t updated yet, Something wrong?
    I was worried cause everytime i check my mail I hope to see that you've updated:)
    February 15th, 2011 at 03:49pm
  • SmurfGirl

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    Sweet Ulric is supposed to be the Alpha! and i already don't like Terrance hahaha. i can tell he's gonna cause problems in the future.
    February 6th, 2011 at 04:10pm
  • Howl

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    I'm greatly enjoying the read but there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes here and there. Nothing a quick once over can't fix. Also be careful when repeating words in the same paragraph for e.g."Pushing myself up I quickly jump back to my feet. Pushing back pain I continue to run as the villagers grew closer, their shouts louder and more excited." Rather make use of synonyms before repeating words; it creates interest and keeps the story flowing smoothly.

    I'm looking forward to more!
    February 6th, 2011 at 11:37am
  • allzac

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    Terrance looks hot.. but Ulric sounds better. And in human form he doesn't sound to bad lol :)
    February 6th, 2011 at 09:39am
  • River Young;

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    Clarence? Haha! His mom seems nice and very nice use of description! I could see it all in MY MIND!!! XD
    February 6th, 2011 at 01:17am
  • SmurfGirl

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    ROFL! Clarence... no wonder he let Roana change it. i would too. can't wait to see what happens next
    February 5th, 2011 at 10:32pm
  • BlondeMilf

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    I really Love this story!! It is different from the other werwolf stories . I can't wait for more...... P.s. I would hate to be named Clarence too lol
    February 5th, 2011 at 04:39pm
  • allzac

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    Hehe Clarence. Hehehe :)
    February 5th, 2011 at 08:21am
  • River Young;

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    This was an awesome chapter! I can't wait til they meet his mom! ^ ^ It was perfectly described and dialouge was perfecto!
    February 5th, 2011 at 02:28am
  • EpitomeofaWallFlower

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    Oh my gosh I love this story so much this has to be the best one I've read yet on mibba XD
    February 5th, 2011 at 12:34am
  • SmurfGirl

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    Awesome chapter! Update soon i have to know what happens when they meet the parents. lol
    February 4th, 2011 at 06:14pm
  • cjoly02

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    Loving the story is so cool ! And don't worry about the dialog you are just fine !!!! Pleaseeeeeee update soon
    February 4th, 2011 at 04:05pm
  • allzac

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    This story is so different then most werewolf stories, but a good different :)
    I love it how you always want people to read and want more of the story, I know I do :)
    February 4th, 2011 at 11:54am
  • Xx-fairywings-xX

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    Great, l love the different few of the werewolves:)
    February 4th, 2011 at 11:02am
  • River Young;

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    Are you kidding me?! Another cliffhanger?! GoooosssshhhH! It was still great! I'd love to have a giant werewolf to cuddle with! lol
    February 4th, 2011 at 03:13am
  • SmurfGirl

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    You r loving cliffhangers in this story aren't u? *mock glairing* Well missy i must say ur doing a good job with them! U r making me wanna pull my hair out in supense!
    February 3rd, 2011 at 06:48pm
  • River Young;

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    Cliff hanger!! I love the werewolf, he seems so cool and kinda sweet when you don't piss him off. This was a great chapter! :)
    February 2nd, 2011 at 11:50pm
  • blackenedrose

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    Oh my gosh this is really good! I love this story :)
    February 2nd, 2011 at 11:04pm
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