Slowly Falling Apart - Comments

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOUUUUUUUUUUU HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOUUUUUUUU HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR STEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPHANIE HAPPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU:)

XOXO
Tallie:)
PS You can have Nick first just because I am THAT nice:)

I'm major happy with Joe right now:) He's stepping up and as long as he doesn't drop one of the twins, he'll be a great daddy:)

Happy belated Birthday! I really liked the chapter! Made me smile!
I think they should be dizygotic and they should have one girl and boy, it'd be well cute! Also it would mean if you are ever gonna continue with the story Joe'd have to deal with girl issues and sawyer with boy ones and I can imagine their characters finding that quite hard!
Any way can't wait for more! x

Happy late birthday!

And cute chapter, I'm glad Joe's stepping up as a daddy!

I love the update :D and happy belated birthday

I'm so glad about the amount of Joe and Ashlyn in this, and i'm going to send you some names the Sawyer likes

Joe. Fainted.

AHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAA

Okay now that that's over *giggles* Ironic stuff and Karma are weird...

Yes, I know they'd be cute:) Now I just have to make the babies happen;););) If you hear that Nick Jonas has been kidnapped....it MAY or MAY NOT of been me0;-)

'well, I've never been good at reading these things' oh Joe. And then he fainted!!!! I laughed out loud! Awesome chapter!!!!! I really really want to know what Denise is gonna say because let's be serious, she knows everything!!! Dun dun duhhhhhh!

Im excited!!!! Please update soon :)

I love the ending! Love it! Poor Joe, though. He yells at his girlfriend, gets good new and then faints. That's got to be kind of embarrassing.

Lol. I can't believe Joe fainted when Ashlyn told him that she was having twins! But I'm glad that she finally told Joe about her being pregnant. I hope they don't get into as many fights anymore.
I'm glad Dani and Kevin have a better relationship. I was getting worried about their relationship. I was hoping that it wasn't going to end in divorce.
Please update soon! Like really soon. Like now.

Omg i loove it! Im soooooo happy yu used my idea! And it came out so AWWESOME! Loll im reaally excited right now just because of this :D and i loved the little Nick/Kylie moment in the kitchen. Nick is so gorgeous<3

TAYLOR FAILED lol

Flip a coin....I don't know if the world could handle EITHER:)

KEVIN GREW A PAIR FINALLY!! I was reall happy with their talking. It showed their stregnth and I can't wait to see them move forward:)

MY MOM AND I WERE TALKING ABOUT IF I MARRIED NICK JONAS and how our babies would have the curliest hair on earth!

Yes! They talked it out! SUCCESS. Lmaoo im really glaad your thinking out my idea of Joe finding out. And btw i would like too see more of ashlyn/joe next chapter(: great updaate! Updaate very sooooooon! :D

Yayyyyy an update!!!!
Ok, so this Taylor chick needs to go lol. And I'm curious if David like knew that she would do something like show up and that's why they changed the plans.
And I'm glad Dani and Kevin are making it work :)

Awesome update I can't wait until the next chapter!!!!!

This story is soo awesome! I've spent the past 2 days reading the whole thing! LOVE IT! Can't wait for more! x

OMG!!! I can't believe Ashlyn is having twins! I hope she tells Joe. Joe deserves to know.
I also hope Kylie and Nick have a child. That would be great for them. Please uPdate soon!!!

OH AND YOU KNOW WHAT I REALLYWANT?!

Taylor and Tyler coming back into the story:)

1) I think the twins should be identical twins since my cousin found out she was preggers and is having identical twins:)
2) I want Kevin and Dani to talk, Nick and Kylie to have some member of her family come into their life, and Sawyer needs to tell Joe she's preggers.

“It would seem that your eggs really liked Joe’s sperm,” Kylie teased.. XD Whose eggs WOULDN'T like ANY of the Jonas boys' sperm?!

Ashlyn looked away…the way they freely loved each other made her jealous.[i/] And it makes me sick lol

Omg TWINS! Awesome! That is so cuute! And i think Ashlyn should find out the sex before she gives birth. And i dont want Joe to be so in the dark :/ maybe he can find the ultrasound and then they'll have the talk(:

Twins! (: That's awesome, what on earth is Joe gunna do??

OMFG!!! Twins?!?!?!?!?! THAT I was NOT expecting!!!

Twins... and now Nick knows!!
Wait for the birth!!! Thats always really sweet.

Ooooooooooo. I wonder how the doctors appointment is going to go
And aw poor dani, and poor Kevin. He needs to come back.
And and nick is so wonderful; I just wanted to point that out :)

Now I should really be going to bed. Great update
Update soonplease