A very good story indeed! AND I would love to read the sequel (cause you're awful for leaving it at a cliffhanger... I hate it but it's like cigarettes... you just have to have more!) :D
YAY... i don't mind the whole... off topic part, but everybody needs a break, and occasionally that applies to hectic but awesome stories.. i was laughing and snickering inside though when his mom was dog piling him with questions... my mom is like that sometimes *rolls eyes*... it is irritating hahaa :D
I am seriously just hating the cliffhangers... but it makes it more interesting... Now I know it's possible to hate something that you love haha :D GREAT STORY! I CANT BELIEVE HE ACTUALLY JUST TOLD HIM HE WAS GAY STRAIGHT OUT! WHAT BRAVERY! :D And a knife? NO! He won't be able to walk for awhile!
YAY. Filler. Can't wait for the next chapter. OH BTW I'm like sixteen in May... BUT also I have the maturity of a seventeen year old :D if that helps with anything since you wanted commenters of ages sixteen or up. Or was it above sixteen? Either way, :D