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  • Nuff_Said

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    *squeal*
    I love this story!
    Please update soon! :33
    June 18th, 2011 at 06:22am
  • littleredgirl

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    This is so so so so good :)
    I love Fred's gingernesss<3
    June 10th, 2011 at 11:36pm
  • paradox-paradox

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    Hi! I'm Cameron! I just wanted to say, I love your story!! I'm writing a HP fan fiction, too, but I'ts not nearly as good as yours. I just wanted to get in touch, seeing you are so brilliant. I was hoping I could learn from you. Ya know, like the tricks of the trade or whatever. Oddly enough, my story starts off at year 4 too, even though I started writing it before I read yours. Maybe you could help me improve my story, and we could collaborate. It would make me ecstatic if you'd write back to me! Thanks,
    -Cameron
    P.s. Can't wait 'til the next chapter!
    June 10th, 2011 at 08:30pm
  • Birchly Reid

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    Really great, is Jacob evil?!
    June 10th, 2011 at 07:52pm
  • not_so_goth

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    Love the story so far! more soon? :)
    June 8th, 2011 at 10:36am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    :O
    May 22nd, 2011 at 04:20pm
  • MerlinWeasley

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    I really love what you did with the characters. Fred and George have always been my favorites, just because they're Fred and George. I love how Ella, Hermione and Ginny interact with each other. It reminds me of my friends and me. And the part where they meet up with Cedric and Fred gets jealous? Perfect. I've read plenty where Fred gets too jealous and it just doesn't fit with how they wrote him. Yours, on the other hand, was dead-on perfect. I also love how Ella and Jacob got into that little spat. It helps build her character, for better or worse - who knows? It's good that you don't try to make Ella too much like one character from the series (many try to copy a female version of Fred and George). All-in-all, I find this pretty good. I did think Ella's and Fred's relationship sprouted rather quickly, but they were friends for a very long time. So, technically, they're relationship was beginning before we started to read. Normally, I would instantly stop reading after that, but I like it. Keep up the amazing work.
    May 21st, 2011 at 01:45am
  • DataBox

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    Amazing story.
    I'm scared for Ella! :o

    Keep up the great work!
    May 19th, 2011 at 02:35am
  • nevershoutmaddiee

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    I was in a horrible mood before i got on and found out you updated. thanks so much, it was amazing. (:
    May 19th, 2011 at 02:04am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I loved the bear part.
    xD
    May 19th, 2011 at 12:45am
  • nevershoutmaddiee

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    i love this.
    i think fred is getting a little over jealous though lol
    and i cant help but wonder what fred would do if ella was entered into the tournament...
    but anywho, i love it (:
    May 16th, 2011 at 02:51am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I think they both should enter.
    xD

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    WAIT NONONONONNONONONO.
    Lettt Ella and Harry enter?
    Obviously Harry's gonna win buuuut still..
    May 16th, 2011 at 02:45am
  • lalasoccer

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    I would like Jacob in it but I dont want him to die
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    I love your story
    Keep updating
    May 16th, 2011 at 02:31am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I love this.
    <3
    It's amazing.
    May 14th, 2011 at 05:53am
  • Hummingbird;

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    I'm so glad they're together! :)
    May 11th, 2011 at 03:24pm
  • Hummingbird;

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    So much drama! Poor Fred! :(
    Update soon! :)
    May 10th, 2011 at 03:49pm
  • Grimley

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    love love love this story!
    you're completely brilliant
    can't wait for more updates :D
    May 10th, 2011 at 09:20am
  • erased memories

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    oh my god oh my god oh my god.
    this is intense. please please please update soon
    May 10th, 2011 at 01:19am
  • erased memories

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    oh my god oh my god oh my god.
    this is intense. please please please update soon
    May 10th, 2011 at 01:19am
  • Hummingbird;

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    Psht! I would slap Jacob too! He didn't have to be a complete meanie!
    Awh, I love Ron and Ella's friendship! :D
    Just to clear up, Ella's in what year again?
    May 9th, 2011 at 12:33am