Hi! I'm Cameron! I just wanted to say, I love your story!! I'm writing a HP fan fiction, too, but I'ts not nearly as good as yours. I just wanted to get in touch, seeing you are so brilliant. I was hoping I could learn from you. Ya know, like the tricks of the trade or whatever. Oddly enough, my story starts off at year 4 too, even though I started writing it before I read yours. Maybe you could help me improve my story, and we could collaborate. It would make me ecstatic if you'd write back to me! Thanks, -Cameron P.s. Can't wait 'til the next chapter!
I really love what you did with the characters. Fred and George have always been my favorites, just because they're Fred and George. I love how Ella, Hermione and Ginny interact with each other. It reminds me of my friends and me. And the part where they meet up with Cedric and Fred gets jealous? Perfect. I've read plenty where Fred gets too jealous and it just doesn't fit with how they wrote him. Yours, on the other hand, was dead-on perfect. I also love how Ella and Jacob got into that little spat. It helps build her character, for better or worse - who knows? It's good that you don't try to make Ella too much like one character from the series (many try to copy a female version of Fred and George). All-in-all, I find this pretty good. I did think Ella's and Fred's relationship sprouted rather quickly, but they were friends for a very long time. So, technically, they're relationship was beginning before we started to read. Normally, I would instantly stop reading after that, but I like it. Keep up the amazing work.
i love this. i think fred is getting a little over jealous though lol and i cant help but wonder what fred would do if ella was entered into the tournament... but anywho, i love it (:
Psht! I would slap Jacob too! He didn't have to be a complete meanie! Awh, I love Ron and Ella's friendship! :D Just to clear up, Ella's in what year again?
I love this story!
Please update soon! :33