Mischief Managed - Comments

this is such a good story my gosh askj;df;ahjolsdf;hlk
glad its been updated for sure :)
i know i say this a lot but ella just fits in here so well its amazing
oh some fred/ella romance :) thats cute <3
xD that whole "you-know-who" conversation was so good haha
oh Caden... why would you do that my gosh.
first day back too.
oh jeez... jacob/ella fight... not good at all
at least they made up,, thats good

I still love this story.

I really like this. :)

I absolutely love this story(:
subbed!

You, Miss Still Waters, have yourself a new reader, subscriber, and fan of your work!!
:)
You add a lot of detail and guess what?
I Love details!

they lost ron and hermione? D;
oh no.. the dreaded skull figure in the sky...
i love how Ella like effortlessly fits in with everyone
she really seems like a character in the books
aww Fred was worried about her <3
gosh can't wait for this relationship to develop :D
well at least the whole group is back together now
you got Molly's personality to the point no doubt
that's exactlly how she is - protective mother to everyone
xD you got the robes that look like they should belong to a girl in there haha
good chapter :)

I loved the update! It was spot on with Molly (: I think you're doing a really good job and can't wait for more (:

I can't wait to read more of this story, it has me pulled in!

I'm really loving this story :) haha It's awesome! Update soon please?

-Commenting on chapter one-
I like how you opened with a line of dialogue - it brought the reader right into the centre of the action. The dialogue throughout the story was realistic and appropriate for the characters and not at all forced or awkward. I haven't read any Harry Potter fanfics before, but being a huge fan, I quite enjoyed this one. (Especially because Fred and George are my fave characters).
I liked the introduction for the main character, Ellie. Not too little and not too much. Just enough.
All that rhymed. Sheesh. :/
Anyways, the story was very good and I liked it a lot. :)

I really like this story too! :D

The orange of the layout reminded of Fred's hair! I don't know if you did that on purpose, but it was epic. And the banner is just so cute. xD ♥♥

Oh, how I love this. Harry Potter is just amazing, and this is as well.

It balances all of the story elements very well.

I'm sure J.K. Rowling would approve.

an update :D I'm excited man!
ohh love me some Cedric Digory,
I can't help that he is so damn hot.. haha
ohhh Fred's gettng jealous, I love it!
ahh the tent thing was so cool!
I swear Fred and George are amazing characters,
I love them both to pieces <3
I love how Hermione and Ron fight all the time, but they are also too perfect for each other
this is random - but you are really good with following the story line of the books!
ahh the death eaters :O i knew that was going to happen, still didn't mean i didn't want it to haha
I like how you got a little seperate thing that happened to the rest of them while the three went off
I'm excited to see what's going to happen in those woods man!
WHAT! who is this man? holy shit.. this can't be good!
UPDATE SOON PLEASE <3

Hey, this is really good! I know you said I only had to read the first chapter, but I liked it so much that I read both :) The layout is really cool, and I love the way Ella's narration seems so natural (suddenly, my clothes began to really fascinate me).

However, I do think that as the story continues, she might come across as a bit...perfect...E.g,but Percy was more like... a nuisance to us all more than anything. But deep down, I knew he wasn't just a prat. Sure, some very rare people might think that, but most would stick with 'he's a prat' or 'he's just misunderstood', etc. Don't make her too all-knowing, ya know?

Apart from that I loved it - will be subscribing!

So, this is wonderful. I do have a couple tips though. You make Ava seem like a little girl, I mean I know that at fourteen, I wasn't able to scoop up an eleven year old. You see what I mean? I think you should have her either younger or make her act more mature. Also, you put a link to show what she wore, in the story, I think that it would be much better if you described her clothes instead of linked it.

I love how she denies anything happening and yet she still blushes. We all know what that means! Haha Wonderful story so far. :)

I LOVE HARRY POTTER! The title is fitting and the layout. It's very focused and clear, I can you know the book well, which says a lot in a good way haha. I love Fred Weasley that's a plus. I like relationship between everyone in general and there was a nice bit of humour, nice and keep up the good work.

This is pretty good.
The layout is nice, not too bright.
Also, I like the idea, mostly cause I'm a big sucker for Fred. ;) But, I also like the main character, she seems good, not too Marie-Sue.
Your writing is simple, but nice.

There was one part where you names everyone, but after each name you put ;, I don't think that's necessary. You can just put a comma.

Also, you followed the book nicely up until now, which is always nice.

Good job. :)

I remember ths story! it's so good <3 :D
i love the relationship between Ella, Hermione, and Ginny
of course they gotthe boys to jump on the bed :) haha
he picked her up haha nice. i bet she liked that ;)
haha I like how she woke Harry up xD that's the way to do it!
of course those two twins are always up tos something haha
I like how you got some of the fourth book in here, it follows it well
because in the beginning they really did all go to the portkey :)
I love the little compliment Ella got from Fred :)
I'm excited to see more of them I realy, really am!
loved the second just as much as the first <3 great job!

I love this so, so much!

I really love how, in the first chapter, you immediately establish the relationship between Ella's family and the Weasleys. It's clear straight away how much Ella values them, almost as second parents, and it's a very touching relationship to see.

I also really like how your OCs fit in so neatly with the canon characters. Often, OCs seem very out-of-place in an established universe, but Ella seems so normal and natural that she blends right in with the established canon of the books and, although the narrator of the story, makes no effort to seem "speshul" or mary-sueish, which I love. She's a great character to follow and a very interesting, relatable narrator and the way she thinks, combined with the way you write, make her so easy to read!

I love it!