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  • The0neThatL0ves

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    Update Soon!
    September 8th, 2011 at 07:45am
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Interesting phone conversation, but I won't hate him, because as you said, we don't know the full story yet. Although I liked how you wrote the romance between the two of them, it fitted well. :)

    I also liked the part with her father, and it's probably a good thing she's letting him start over with her pretty much. Hopefully it'll work. :)

    I'm looking forward to the next update. :)

    ~Lady
    June 28th, 2011 at 03:56pm
  • bo_Omshakalaka_

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    Oh but he would. D;
    June 27th, 2011 at 11:22pm
  • Im_A_Fan_Of_Myself

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    I dont hate seth...but i dont want them to break either
    June 27th, 2011 at 11:05pm
  • BananaILoveYou.

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    I adore this story :D
    June 27th, 2011 at 08:48pm
  • rockprincess6988

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    oh he is dead to me! Sophia? he slept with that tramp! i'm moving to siberia where i cant be angered by this
    June 27th, 2011 at 08:24pm
  • Im_A_Fan_Of_Myself

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    Wow.....Lovvvvveeeedddddd it
    June 24th, 2011 at 01:05am
  • Tweetybird13

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    Wow
    June 23rd, 2011 at 04:42pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Got to love the immature drama of high school, how I'm so happy I'm out of it.

    Part of me thinks Sophia's lying, because that's what bitches do when they want a guy who an "unpopular" girl is dating, but then again, she might not be. So much drama! And it seems it's only going to get worse as the story progresses, but usually that happens in high school, it all just explodes at the end of the year. :/

    Anyway, it was an interesting update. :)

    ~Lady
    June 23rd, 2011 at 02:36pm
  • bo_Omshakalaka_

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    I'm not sure about this whole thing with Seth. He wouldn't do something like that.. would he?
    June 23rd, 2011 at 12:15pm
  • Tweetybird13

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    I just sat here and read all 13 chapters and loved it .
    June 12th, 2011 at 04:59pm
  • morte et dabo

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    this story and every one of your stories are amazing. you have to update before july 1:( i'll be so bored
    June 9th, 2011 at 09:31pm
  • crazyzebra121

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    this story is great! i usually read it on my phonee so i cant comment but knoww ive been reading it since you started it (((: pleeeeasse update faster!!!
    June 9th, 2011 at 01:04am
  • BananaILoveYou.

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    I love it all :D
    June 9th, 2011 at 12:21am
  • Im_A_Fan_Of_Myself

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    cant wait til update again
    June 8th, 2011 at 08:39pm
  • bo_Omshakalaka_

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    I hope you can update sooner than July 1st!
    I can sense some drama coming up...
    June 8th, 2011 at 07:45pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    I absolutely love the book segment in here, I'm like that with my books, especially with ones that I absolutely love, an example would be my Anne Rice books in my mom's huge bookcase in our spare room. :)

    Anyway, I'm looking forward to what will be happening next, especially with Gretchen. Seems like some old school drama will be unfolding, and I always get a chuckle out of the drama in stories, they make you forget about your own problems for a small moment. :)

    ~Lady
    June 8th, 2011 at 03:49pm
  • Haley'sfreakingout

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    love it !
    June 3rd, 2011 at 01:03am
  • rockprincess6988

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    Chocolate milk tastes like chocolate? Lies, lies I tell u LIES
    June 2nd, 2011 at 01:11am
  • tannabanana

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    Yesssss, a new chapter! <3

    Well, I definitely liked it. No James and Millie is sorta happy that James isn't her dad. I was actually scared that Jailie would move far away.
    June 2nd, 2011 at 12:10am
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