When It All Falls Apart - Comments

  • arisosupernaturl

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    :) for sizzle.
    loooveeee it.
    June 1st, 2011 at 11:45pm
  • bo_Omshakalaka_

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    You update fast and I love it!
    June 1st, 2011 at 09:20pm
  • Im_A_Fan_Of_Myself

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    cant wait for more
    June 1st, 2011 at 08:25pm
  • arisosupernaturl

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    Hell yea.!
    mom's gotta some guts.! good shit
    nice shout-out loveeee this story. :)
    June 1st, 2011 at 02:48am
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Well, hopefully James won't come beg Cassandra back, because it sounds like she's in a domestic violent relationship, which sucks. I know, it took me eleven chapters to figure it out, either that, or he's a huge control freak.

    Anyway, I love how Seth and Jailie are with one another, and how understanding he is with her. Even though he's a fictional character, those types of guys are still hard to come by. :)

    Hopefully where ever Cassandra goes, Jailie won't be far from Seth.

    ~Lady
    June 1st, 2011 at 01:24am
  • tannabanana

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    Yesssss. No more James? Hopefully she isn't moving far away from Seth and she'll still go to the same school because if not... well, that would really suck :\
    May 31st, 2011 at 11:16pm
  • CAFFEINE!!!

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    So much has happened.. I love it.
    Ahhhhmazing deary(:
    May 31st, 2011 at 10:42pm
  • Im_A_Fan_Of_Myself

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    yay keep the updates coming
    May 31st, 2011 at 09:26pm
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    Oh god, tell me you're gonna update again!
    May 31st, 2011 at 09:16pm
  • rockprincess6988

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    She's not moving far from Seth right? I'll cry if she does I swear it!
    May 31st, 2011 at 08:55pm
  • Im_A_Fan_Of_Myself

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    wow...looovvveeeddd itttt
    May 31st, 2011 at 07:57pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    I'm happy I stumbled upon this as I was looking for something else to read on here.

    At the beginning, I wasn't too impressed with Jailie's mother, she needed a backbone, and not make her husband and stepdaughter her first priority. Needless to say, I was very happy that she told that douche of a husband she wanted a divorce in the last update.

    Overall, I really like this story, even though I tend not to read theses types of stories. You've kept me entertained throughout the updates, and not once did I get bored while I read this. I'm looking forward to where this story will go, even through all the ups and downs of life. :)

    ~Lady
    May 31st, 2011 at 06:37pm
  • arisosupernaturl

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    is there a time lapse in the last chapter.?
    May 31st, 2011 at 05:40pm
  • bo_Omshakalaka_

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    Yaaaay.[:
    Go Cassandra!!
    May 31st, 2011 at 05:06pm
  • rockprincess6988

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    Ha! Stick that in your pipe and smoke it James! *happy dance* I'm glad Jai and Seth are going to be stable I'll be traumatised if audrey gets her way
    May 31st, 2011 at 04:33pm
  • Haley'sfreakingout

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    I absolutley adore this story, please update, like..today ? (:
    May 31st, 2011 at 09:55am
  • rockprincess6988

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    Haha what can I say I'm highly pessimistic but I really like this story I just hope that bit h audrey don't get her claws into Seth as u have a feeling she will :(
    May 31st, 2011 at 05:09am
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    Whaa, How could you end it there? xO
    May 27th, 2011 at 09:53pm
  • Im_A_Fan_Of_Myself

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    loved that chapter
    May 27th, 2011 at 08:15pm
  • bo_Omshakalaka_

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    I like this (:
    May 27th, 2011 at 05:35pm