The Blank Fortune Cookie - Comments

I'm not usually a fan of drabbles, but I actually really like this. Drabbles tend to leave me wanting more, but this was the perfect length.

I also like how you made the character react to her fortune, and not get angry or sad.

You did a good job. :]

I am judging for the contest :D
I like this...The blank fortune cookie thing is really interesting. And how the character didn't take it in a depressing way, but took it as their future still yet to be written - I love that.
It's short but that just seems to make it better.
The way you wrote it was amazing, like it wasn't a story more like someone's thoughts or journal or something. Very nice.
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I actually like this. I think you should maybe extend it into a part two. I had a cookie once that wasn't a fortune, it was a definition. It gave me what the definition of a kiss was. Suffice it to say, I wasn't all that pleased, lol. IT's short, but the way you word everything makes it seem like the reader's listening to another person's thoughts. Great job! And sorry it took me forever to comment your stories. Life's been pretty busy now.... well! Once to the next one XD