I don't know how it's possible for any story to be this fucked up but be so beautiful. I found this earlier and I don't regret skipping doing my homework for this at all. I laughed, was amused and sobbed my way through this story. Hopefully you update soon!
Just found this story and I cannot wait for more! I truly love it. I simply adore Tom and Gemma's relationship, as much of a douchebag Tom is and as much of a emotionless person Gemma is; I truly love them together. ^.^
I absolutely loved this chapter, dear! I adore Gemma and Tom's relationship, no matter how many lows they have. The highs are what make it so great! The love/hate relationship is completely overplayed nowadays, but you make it so original it makes me sick--in a good way! I look forward to your next chapter (:
I love that she kissed him and still decided to leave! I didn't see that coming! Even if you feel like your writing is bad, it probably isn't! Everything you write is great :) Update soon please <3
I love that she kissed him and still decided to leave! I didn't see that coming! Even if you feel like your writing is bad, it probably isn't! Everything you write is great :) Update soon please <3
Fuckman. I love this so much. I love Gemma. She's perfect. And the end was perfect because if she had said "I'm staying" or whatever it wouldn't have been Gemma . Fucking fuck I should be studying but this is perfect much like you and yeah ok I'm done.
Ugh dude I love Gemma. She's one of my favorite characters you've ever written. She's a BAMF. But anyways... I knew Tom wasn't going to punch her, but I LOVED how you wrote that scene. The buildup to him hitting the bus, the people running towards them, and especially Gemma's reaction. So good. As usual! :)
God damn I've missed this story!!! I'm so proud of Gemma for actually standing up for herself. Tommy's been a right shit head to her! Hopefully they don't fall back into the same groove again...
Thanks for updating! I'm glad you're back. I've definitely missed this story a lot. Update soon!