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  • Pr1celess

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    I really miss this story. /:
    May 26th, 2013 at 08:54am
  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    Ugh I really need you to continue with this! I'm dying here!
    April 25th, 2013 at 10:31pm
  • InfinitelyReckless

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    I don't know how it's possible for any story to be this fucked up but be so beautiful. I found this earlier and I don't regret skipping doing my homework for this at all. I laughed, was amused and sobbed my way through this story. Hopefully you update soon!
    June 25th, 2012 at 05:45pm
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    Just found this story and I cannot wait for more! I truly love it. I simply adore Tom and Gemma's relationship, as much of a douchebag Tom is and as much of a emotionless person Gemma is; I truly love them together. ^.^
    June 16th, 2012 at 09:18am
  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    I absolutely loved this chapter, dear! I adore Gemma and Tom's relationship, no matter how many lows they have. The highs are what make it so great! The love/hate relationship is completely overplayed nowadays, but you make it so original it makes me sick--in a good way! I look forward to your next chapter (:
    February 14th, 2012 at 03:54am
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    I loveee this story! Omg. I can't wait for the next update! :D
    February 9th, 2012 at 09:29pm
  • banana sykes.

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    I love that she kissed him and still decided to leave! I didn't see that coming! Even if you feel like your writing is bad, it probably isn't! Everything you write is great :) Update soon please <3
    January 9th, 2012 at 07:08am
  • banana sykes.

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    I love that she kissed him and still decided to leave! I didn't see that coming! Even if you feel like your writing is bad, it probably isn't! Everything you write is great :) Update soon please <3
    January 9th, 2012 at 07:08am
  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    Yesssssssss I absolutely loved it. Good work! Update soon!
    December 18th, 2011 at 03:50pm
  • outthewindow.

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    This is probably my favorite chapter so far.
    December 15th, 2011 at 10:21pm
  • one.more.night

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    I absolutely love this story!
    December 14th, 2011 at 11:58pm
  • you

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    I really love this. But I'm hoping Gemma doesn't fall back and actually kind of moves on for a bit, just to recollect herself, you know? Lovely story.
    December 14th, 2011 at 07:02am
  • hellxoxsunshine

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    daayyummm o.o
    December 13th, 2011 at 07:36am
  • xstoriesyettounfoldx

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    Fuckman. I love this so much. I love Gemma. She's perfect. And the end was perfect because if she had said "I'm staying" or whatever it wouldn't have been Gemma . Fucking fuck I should be studying but this is perfect much like you and yeah ok I'm done.
    December 13th, 2011 at 06:27am
  • lex;

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    Ooooooh Tom was salty. I was too. Why is she making it more complicated than it is?!!?!?!?
    December 13th, 2011 at 06:25am
  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    OMG IM SO IRRITATED WITH TOMMY.

    Fuckkk.
    December 1st, 2011 at 01:29am
  • xstoriesyettounfoldx

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    Ugh dude I love Gemma. She's one of my favorite characters you've ever written. She's a BAMF. But anyways... I knew Tom wasn't going to punch her, but I LOVED how you wrote that scene. The buildup to him hitting the bus, the people running towards them, and especially Gemma's reaction. So good. As usual! :)
    November 16th, 2011 at 04:31pm
  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    God damn I've missed this story!!! I'm so proud of Gemma for actually standing up for herself. Tommy's been a right shit head to her! Hopefully they don't fall back into the same groove again...

    Thanks for updating! I'm glad you're back. I've definitely missed this story a lot. Update soon!
    November 7th, 2011 at 07:59pm
  • lex;

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    i'm glad she's done letting him walk all over her but DAMN IT i just want them to be together D:
    October 26th, 2011 at 08:45pm
  • banana sykes.

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    Thanks for the update, the wait was worth it :)
    October 22nd, 2011 at 03:44am