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  • outthewindow.

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    Let me begin by saying THANK YOU!
    I've been waiting for this chapter for a while,
    and when I say 'this chapter' I'm reffering to the one where Gemma finally stands up for herself.
    It's so good to see her be the strong woman she really is, and seing her say no to Tom.
    I'm looking forward to how you'll work this out, if Tom and Gemma even work out at all.
    I'm sure their relationship could go in many directions.
    You've really accomplished setting up a very complex and very human reltionship.
    October 21st, 2011 at 09:53pm
  • SnowWhite.

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    I guess I'll be honesttttttttt, I could use you around. I can't stand the dork that you're hangin' with now!

    Fuckin' love the wonder years (:. Off the read the story now C:
    October 21st, 2011 at 01:17pm
  • hellxoxsunshine

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    I'm proud of Gemma for finally sticking up for herself. And I'm proud of Tom for chasing after her (:

    DON;T KEEP ME WAITING SO LONG. Jeez. -.-
    October 21st, 2011 at 06:21am
  • hellxoxsunshine

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    I'm proud of Gemma for finally sticking up for herself. And I'm proud of Tom for chasing after her (:

    DON;T KEEP ME WAITING SO LONG. Jeez. -.-
    October 21st, 2011 at 06:21am
  • xstoriesyettounfoldx

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    so idk why I'm just now reading the update. I think my internet was off when you updated the other night, but regardless. sfdljfdsjfsjksdfjkdjkdfsjkhdfs TOM DON'T MAKE ME COME THROUGH THIS COMPUTER SCREEN AND SMACK DOWN WITH YOU. BECAUSE I WILL. DON'T TEMPT ME, BOY.
    ugh he's being stupid but I like it maybe that's my problem maybe I like stupid boys danielle THAT MUST BE It la la la I loved this though obviously I mean really I love everything you write, always.

    I love Gemma though. She's perfect. And the flashback at the end? sjksdjkhs UGH GIVE ME MORE.

    okayloveyoubye <3
    August 12th, 2011 at 07:04am
  • outthewindow.

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    I know I used to comment so much more, so I'm sorry I haven't been giving this story the attention I gave You're Gone.
    I really do enjoy it just as much. I've just been too busy to comment on anything.
    It's such an intersting read, and, like YG, it's like nothing I've ever seen before.
    I have no idea how you come up with these story lines, especially one like this where there are so many ups and downs and twists and turns.
    Like I said, very interesting, and very well written.
    You're still doing a phenominal job. Don't forget it. Keep it up, love!
    August 12th, 2011 at 02:27am
  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    OJFSAONFAISNFAUSIHFAISULEGHALSHGNASIJGBNASILJGHASLKHDGFBHASILNDFHASNLIDFBNASILFGBASILGBASILGNASIGHFASLIBGISDASDBFIANSFOANSG;ONROIUGHWIUEFNFIWGHASILFUGBNSALIUGFNASIDUFHABNSGLJBSADLGKNSRLGBLSRIUGB!!!!

    Goddammit, you turd. I hate when the chapters end! Because that means I don't have any more to read! You better update real soon, or I'll be upset. And that's not a threat; that's a promise!!!

    (:
    August 10th, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    Oh my god, I love when I miss a chapter and I get to read two of them instead of just one(: It completely makes my life! Haaaa.
    I completely love the way he chose that moment to confess his undying love to Gemma. It's freakin' radical! Like, the most unlikely time to say that. It's awesome. Lol
    Keep it up, doll, it's amazing! Can't wait for another update!!
    August 6th, 2011 at 01:35am
  • done in love.

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    They would get arrested. That fits them so freaking well.
    And I'm loving the piles of shit they have to swim through.
    This is just amazing right now.
    July 30th, 2011 at 06:01pm
  • xstoriesyettounfoldx

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    omg the last sentence though. I loved that, idk man. BUT JEEZUS I LOVED THIS. Especially them getting arrested. idk it was just really, really perfect. I can't wait to find out who they call. Because it can only be really, really good after this. ;)
    <3
    July 30th, 2011 at 05:56am
  • done in love.

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    So I had a dream about a week ago that was kind of about this story.
    I must have been in the UK or something, because I met Oli and Tom, plus the boys of Asking Alexandria (minus Sam Bettley) for some reason.
    But apparently (and this would never happen in real life), my mom noticed Oli and started up a conversation with him while I was talking to Ben and Danny of AA. Then I went over and struck up a conversation with Tom and I asked about Gemma, so we talked about her for a while.

    I honestly don't have any idea where this dream came from, or why AA was in it, but I found this quite comical. >.<

    Anyways, I just can't get over my love for this story; especially Gemma and Tom's roller-coaster.
    I'm curious to see what got up Tom's ass, other than his badly-placed suspicion.
    July 21st, 2011 at 09:45pm
  • banana sykes.

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    Yay I was waiting for the update! I think Tom is going to ignore her for a while and Gem is not going to like that at all, and she's finally going to blow up on him! But I'm not sure I'm always surprised at these updates !! Thanks x
    July 21st, 2011 at 06:51am
  • banana sykes.

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    I just starrted reading this and when I got to the last chapter I was like "noooooooooooo!" AMAZING!! Can't wait for the next update!!
    July 12th, 2011 at 06:39pm
  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    Definitelly epic(: I love this little relationshit they have going on here. It makes me happy, although it's not a particularly ideal situation. I feel like they were made for each other! This has got to be my favorite story, hands down, that I've read lately. Keep up the outstanding work, dear!
    July 12th, 2011 at 02:16am
  • done in love.

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    Jesus, they're just like a fucking roller-coaster, aren't they?
    In one chapter, they're up, then down, then back up.
    They need to get their acts together!
    But I love when they're like this too...

    It seems I have a dilemma.
    July 9th, 2011 at 05:25am
  • ComeOnCloser

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    I really like this. It's really very good, you're a wonderful writter and now that I've subscribes to this, I think I'm going to have a look at your other work. Your a much better writter than I've ever thought about being! Please do us all a favor and don't be one of the writters that abandons and forgets about thier greatest works! I love this and I cannot wait for more, I hope you update soon(:
    July 7th, 2011 at 11:23pm
  • xstoriesyettounfoldx

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    Can we please talk about how much I loved the beginning of this? Idk I just really enjoyed it! I can't wait for the next because I can only imagine how epic its going to be.
    July 7th, 2011 at 04:40pm
  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    I'm super excited! Can't wait for another chapter to be out! I love when shit starts to get real(: Makes me one happy lass! Update update update!
    July 5th, 2011 at 10:30pm
  • bessie162

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    I just read this story and I am in love! I love Tom and you're writing is amazing! I can't wait to read more :)
    June 27th, 2011 at 03:33am
  • jenny holzer.

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    I actually don't think I've formally commented on this but I love it and you are fantastic. ♥
    That's really all I have to say I think. My comments aren't the best past midnight..
    June 23rd, 2011 at 06:34am