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  • done in love.

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    D'aw, that flashback was adorable!
    And things about to get real?
    This should be interesting. :P

    Excitement: this girl has it.
    June 16th, 2011 at 05:22am
  • outthewindow.

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    The author's note makes me nervous.
    Things have been pretty messed up for these two so far, and if shit getting real is bad, then I'm kind of scared for Gemma and Tom.
    Also, I want to say, it's really nice to read something from you that's not that heavy.
    I kind of missed the lightness in Easy to Love - not that Selfish Machines is exactly like it, I think you're writing has gotten even better since then.
    Anyway, you're doing a great job with this.
    Another chapter soon?
    June 10th, 2011 at 12:55am
  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    Once again, loooovely chapter! Can't wait until you post the next one!!
    June 10th, 2011 at 12:40am
  • done in love.

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    What'd he do now?
    Jesus, he never fails to fuck things up.
    But that's why we love him. :P
    June 9th, 2011 at 08:40pm
  • PsychoBarbie

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    I am in love with this story:)
    June 9th, 2011 at 06:38pm
  • xstoriesyettounfoldx

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    Can we talk about how much I love this? Cause I do.
    CLIFFHANGERS FTW BITCH, I CANNOT WAIT TO HEAR WHAT TOM FUCKED UP THIS TIME. Haha ;)
    June 9th, 2011 at 06:12am
  • frankschick1

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    Great story!

    Keep up the good work and I can't wait for an update!
    June 9th, 2011 at 05:45am
  • outthewindow.

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    So, since You're Gone is finished, I finally took the time to start reading this.
    I'm really enjoying it so far.
    While Tom and Gemma's relationship isn't exactly ideal, it makes for a great read.
    Can't wait for more, love!
    June 2nd, 2011 at 07:04pm
  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    That Amy bird is mad crazy. Like, seriously. Damn. But, awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
    May 28th, 2011 at 12:38am
  • done in love.

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    Well that fight had to have been crazy. My lord.
    Now, you know what's not a good song to go with this story? Pomp and Circumstance. That's stuck in my fucking head right now and I want to kill a small child because it so does not fit this story.
    I can't even think of things to say right now because it's pissing me off too much.
    But I just can't get over this story. i love it
    May 25th, 2011 at 11:32pm
  • xstoriesyettounfoldx

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    I just got so freaking excited when I got the email saying you updated. Because I love this so much. I love Gemma. She's a HBIC to the CORE and I love it so much. And then of course I love Tom. And Matty.
    But Jesus fucking Christ, Amy makes me want to throw my head through a wall.

    Perfect, darling! Can't wait for more :3
    May 25th, 2011 at 04:57am
  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    I absolutely love this(: I can't wait for you to update! Tom is so damn sexy :D
    May 23rd, 2011 at 12:23am
  • MforMaeri

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    I have a feeling that this story will turn out even greater than it already is!
    May 11th, 2011 at 10:57pm
  • xstoriesyettounfoldx

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    Oh god this was so fab. I love the Tom chapters so much, fo REAL. And I love gemma's personality. Hbic right there. Can't wait for mooooooore! :3 <3
    May 11th, 2011 at 02:47pm
  • Kylene

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    ...bahahaha, i laughed so hard when she suggested tom call her after amy fell asleepxD i love this story, so when you update, it makes me happy(: great job!
    April 30th, 2011 at 12:31am
  • Confide.

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    I already know the new story will be just as good as this one
    April 28th, 2011 at 02:54pm
  • sad vinny

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    i already dont want to stop reading this---- ;D!!!
    April 28th, 2011 at 04:30am
  • MforMaeri

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    This was a great chapter! I love the relationship they have, even though it's kinda twisted, you know?
    Can't wait to read more. Tom seems like such an asshole but still adorable. I love it!
    April 18th, 2011 at 03:38am
  • xstoriesyettounfoldx

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    Ugh I love this already but no surprise there. I LOVE Gemma, seriously. Love how feisty she is with Tom. SPEAKING OF. I love Tom. I love their relationship too. Ugh I'm excited for this, can't wait for the next chapter! :) <3
    April 18th, 2011 at 12:12am
  • ethereally

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    wait so tom really wasn't a virgin!?
    woah woah woahhh!
    that dog!
    i still love him though :)
    and this story is already amazing. keep it up :}
    April 16th, 2011 at 07:46pm