This was the best story I've read in a long long time! So many times I cried so hard, so many times I smiled like a doofus, and the last part... As much as it was sad, it was absolutely perfect. Make me appreciate my mum this little more.
I just started reading the story, and I wanted to point something out. In the beginning of chapter two you start out in first person and then by the fifth or so sentence you switch it to third person. Your story is good so far, just wanted to let you know :)
i am so sorry about your mom i dont know what i would do without mine but keep living life and make your mom proud im sure she wouldnt want you to do your very best as for the story awwwwwww can jack and alex adopt sammie??? after they get married of course haha sending you all my love
I am so sorry about your mum. I cant even being to understand how hard it must be for you. You are a fantastic writer and I will definately see this story through to the end, whenever you are ready to share it. <3
I'm SO sorry to hear about your mom :'( I can't even begin to fathom what you're going through. Thanks for updating <3 I have a feeling Jack's gonna propose in the next chapter!
I'm so sorry to hear about your mom, I bet she was a wonderful woman. I love this story and will be ready to read the rest whenever you are ready to share it :)