Yeah so got really scared about what his secret was and thought, man he's going to do something dumb, but I was thrown for a loop with going to California.
NO!!!!!!!! YOu can't just leave off saying he can't tell her!!!! That's like baking cookies that will melt in your mouth and suddenly you won't give people any . . . that's just cruel!
Hehe. I like the one-upmanship between the two of them. Poor Rhys, being put in the 'friend' category is tough. It's been tough week for Arsenal fans, but the update helped. :)
I love the teasing the players shouted, "spanish chocolate babies" I really like that one since I'm half black it made me crack up. I even had my sisters read it and they were dying and liked it too. Good Job!
LOL @ "Cescy poo". Given how the Arsenal players interact, good natured ribbing is more likely than not. Poor Cesc is done for. :) But what are Kaori's feelings? And am I right in suspecting troubled waters ahead? Kaori's parents? Carla's reemergence? WAG conflicts?
I love this story! It's so cute how Cesc was jealous of Rhys! I really like how Kaori isn't the standard leading female/ love interest in a story about a footballer!
gotta admit that i kinda feel bad for rhys :( all he wants is kaori but she wants cesc who was being a jerk at the beginning of the update but made up for it at the end with that kiss :) loved it!! more soon :) or whenever..dont wanna rush ya! haha :D