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  • better.than.sex

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    okay. just a few things:
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    Cesc did give me curious looks from time to time asking if I was alright but I quickly smiled back and nodded. Cesc tugged my hand as we walked across the street trying not to get run over, I laughed when I saw the gunner trip but quickly caught his balance.

    “I did that to put a smile on your face” he smiled sheepishly.
    sooo cute. he's too adorable for his own good - and mine ;) haha
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    ...but nothing can beat the tango. I heard it was like having sex on the dance floor and when the lights dimmed down as the couples danced across the stage.

    Those people, who told me that, weren’t lying one bit.
    Haha it is. as a dancer myself, the tango is one of the hardest
    dances to learn. i haven't mastered it yet, but im determined to :P
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    ‘You need to be more aggressive Cesc, you have to let her know that you are interested by giving her subtle hints like taking her out somewhere special. Don’t be that awkward weird 16 year old boy when you first arrived here, be a man.’
    :D hahaha again. WAY TOO ADORABLE!

    great job with the update. those were some of my favorite parts..though
    i will say that when you shifted from Kaori's point of view to third person
    it kinda threw me off...but i caught on :) just a lil confused at first. but
    overall it was a good chapter :D more yeahh??
    April 24th, 2011 at 11:58pm
  • RomansRevenge;;

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    Cute:)
    April 22nd, 2011 at 02:04pm
  • my immortal

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    Thanks for the mention, hon. That was SO cute - you know I loved!
    April 16th, 2011 at 02:19am
  • my immortal

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    That was cute! LOVE the overprotective brotherly vibe and the guys' teasing! <3 Robin. Good job :D write moooooorrrrrreeee
    April 11th, 2011 at 07:01am
  • better.than.sex

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    ok so i am finally caught up with this story and
    realized that you explained her partial vision in
    the chapter i had stopped at haha. just needed
    to keep reading :P as for the latest update...i
    love how cesc gets all embarrassed and
    flustered when the guys are hassling him :D lol
    great job! you're welcome for the comments! more
    soon :))))))
    April 11th, 2011 at 01:54am
  • better.than.sex

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    okay so im only on chapter two so far and
    i love it btw!! but i have a question, which is
    probably a stupid one, but i gotta ask anyway
    is Kaori full blind? or partially? i probably
    skipped over that fact....but it's great so far!
    im gonna keep reading though :D
    April 4th, 2011 at 07:12pm
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    That was so cute!
    April 3rd, 2011 at 02:43pm
  • fireworks991

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    No comments on this story? I absolutely love it! I can't wait for more and it's so unique since she has a problem with her eyesight. Cesc is soooo nice and understanding. I can't wait to see how they develop.
    March 13th, 2011 at 09:09pm