Murder at the Hog's Head - Comments

I love the whole idea of this. The summary is hilarious, too. I have a feeling this is gonna be good.

Okay, the start of this definitely reminded me of Calvin & Hobbes. When Calvin's pretending to be a detective? That's what it sounded like, it's awesome.
XD If wizards we real… this is amazing. It's really disconcerting hearing Harry talk in first person.
LMFAO OMG THIS JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER. POLICE CHIEF DUMBLEDORE?! TOM RIDDLE AS A GANGSTER WITH HIS NOSE CHOPPED OFF?!?!?! You're killing me.
I literally laughed out out a couple times at chapter two… Ron and Dumbledore… haha
omggg and Ollivander has a gun shop. Ahhhh this is incredible.
Ha and Star Wars, with the gun lasers? x)

Okay, sorry for being so informal up there, I comment while reading and it gets crazy. This was crazy too, I was cracking up the whole time. Damn, it was like a crackfic. I loved how it paralleled the wizarding world so well. I could seriously see Harry being a private-eye or something cause he's such an idiot about looking for danger and shizz. So, I thought it was really good even if it was rushed. I couldn't find any errors in it or anything, which is excellent. Thanks for entering! (:

Cool. First comment. I like it. It's a bit confusing but from all of your stories I can see you're a brilliant writer. Keep working on it! I'm def. gonna subscribe!

And if you get the time, please venture over to my stories and tell me what you think.