Telescope Eyes - Comments

if this chapter had a like button i'd be clicking that thing like 20 million times.
i just really want a boyfriend like eric halvorsen...

got home from work.. and I had this little gem waiting for me. Wow. Came out even better than planned. Poor little Colton... almost made me like kids.

Oh my god i actually sat in my seat staring at the computer for like 5 minuets with my hand over my mouth LOL. I couldn't believe that just happened. I mean wow! I didn't see that coming. Also.. what happened to the cookies... well i mean they burnt right...?

I can't even ojdsgidhsgdsbgd I love this story too much. I need to know what happens next. update!!

update please! im obsessed! :)

Team John

John is definitely jealous. I'm still torn about which team I'm on! One chapter I'm so team John and then the next chapter I'm team Halvo. They're both so cute and caring, ugh.

I hope you feel better soon. I'm sorry times have been rough lately.

I really love everything about this story. It's for sure my favorite Halvo story. I'm so Team Halvo because he's just so precious in this story and so loving to Colton ugh, I love it.

damn cant wait to see Johns reaction
Im with John :]

You make it so freakin' hard for me to choose sides here!
It's like, I love John's words, but not his actions
And I love Eric's actions and his words, but he still just doesn't have what John has
I'm torn.
The end
Update soon! I hope you feel better :) Feel free to message me or something to talk even though I'm a weird stranger on the interwebz

John will be sooo jealous. Felicity? Eric is so cool.

OK, so normally in triangle stories I already know who I want the girl to be with within a few chapters. In this one, I still don't know. It's starting to drive me insane, because one chapter I'm all Team John, but then the next I'm Team Eric.

Conflicted.

P.S. I love the poem from "500 Days of Summer" on your profile page. Classic. hahaha

Sorry about the sucky start to your senior year. Hope it gets better soon!!
I think John will definitely be jeaous that Micah slept with Eric. He seemed jealous when he asked Micah if she was ready to go all the way with Eric. I also think his jealousy will cause problems for Eric and Micah's relationship and cause friction between all of them.

' im in like with you'
i found that line so wierd and funny xP

but they seem so sweet together :3
<3

TEAM JOHN <3
Keep the updates coming!!!!
<3<3<3<3<3

oh Micah, you slut. She lost it to Eric? ERIC?! wow.

AHH, I LOVE THIS STORY TOO MUCH. I love the way its written and I can't wait to see how the past and future match up with each other. UPDATE SOON!

Aw, Ketely, I'm sorry to hear about your friends passing and your family problems. And the strep throat. but always remember that even if right now sucks, it will get better!

As for the story, I absolutely loved it. I feel like Micah is actually a little confused about who she loves. She might be in love with Halvo, but I think that she's secretly in love with John too, she just doesn't know it. I feel like sex is going to change things (obviously) a lot between Micah and Halvo because he could want it again and she might not so that could lead to conflict, especially with John. I think John will get jealous, but he won't really show it. He has Addison and things are going well with them, and he probably doesn't want to ruin anything with Halvo and Micah, so he'll just keep it to himself. and I'm team Eric, I think, mainly because he's going to get hurt so bad. Then again, John is going to get hurt just as much. I don't know!

I saw this story had been updated, I got excited haha.
It's been a while.
I love John, honestly, he's just so cute.
And either it's jealousy or...his feelings getting the best of him.
But as always...I'm Team John, but slowly sliding into Team Eric and that is a first coming from me.
Can't wait.
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