Learning to Fall. - Comments

I was pretty intrigued by this. I don't tend to read slash(and I've never read male pregnancy) as quite often it tends to be over dramatised but you've manage to put a lot of detail and emotion into this
Oh I love this little bit of dialogue
"I thought you were just getting a few things."

"I'm a consummate over-achiever." Pete said as the door shut behind him.

First chapter of a probably three chaptered fic. This is for a contest that has to be in by the end of this month and I'm working my ass off on this fic (already 3500 words into chapter two), so this one should actually get finished. (Shocking, I know.)

As always, comments are very much appreciated.

xoxox
-Dru