We Come out at Night - Comments

  • Scorpianram99

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    please update i miss this story
    December 11th, 2011 at 11:17pm
  • Scorpianram99

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    love more soon
    March 22nd, 2011 at 10:26pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Oh my....At least she did the smart thing to run away
    She really didn't deserve to go through the beatings and everything
    And now her father got emberassed in front of his bosses xD Haha, deserves him right
    But Tess should have punched him or one of her sisters goodbye.....something to remember her by
    Hm, I wonder why Matt's so angry with her
    Heidi's probably gonna get worried once she finds out that Tess isn't home
    I'm really looking forward for more
    Hope you update soon :)

    And yeah, there were a couple of mistakes in the story. It'd be better if you corrected them before someone reports or something.
    - My dad will always have visiters over -> visitors
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    stepsisters maid too -> stepsisters' (you forgot the apostrophe)
    - "Just making sure you're making lots of noddles for everyone." -> noodles
    - Damnit! I've been set up!" -> drop the " at the end
    - "Nonsence! If it makes you uncomftable,... -> Nonsense! and uncomfortable
    February 20th, 2011 at 06:06pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    and now she can go run off and be with the ever-so-sexy Matt and Jimmy! yay! dude, i totally would have punched the dad before i walked off =)
    February 20th, 2011 at 04:51pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Haha, they seem to be pretty fond of her crotch xD
    Probably because they can smell the blood....if she has her period
    Hm, the only one who doesn't seem to like her, is Shads....
    I wonder why....
    Hm Tess is probably right and she will see the guys again, pretty soon at that
    She probably shouldn't tell Heidi about it just yet....
    I'm really looking forward for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    February 16th, 2011 at 11:33pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    i wish the a7X boys would surround me in the woods without clothes on...
    February 16th, 2011 at 05:06pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    hey girl, i will so keep on commenting for this story, do not worry!
    awesome update, i remember why i loved this story so much to begin with!
    February 12th, 2011 at 07:05pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Seriously, this story seems insanely interesting
    Haha, her stuff was stolen by Zacky, nice
    At least they seem like really nice 'dogs', haha
    Can't wait to see where this'll go
    I'm really looking forward for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    February 12th, 2011 at 01:37pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    hell yes, first commenter!
    ok, i've already read this stuff, but i could care less, and i'm gonna do it again!
    UPDATE.
    February 10th, 2011 at 05:05pm