Oh my....At least she did the smart thing to run away She really didn't deserve to go through the beatings and everything And now her father got emberassed in front of his bosses xD Haha, deserves him right But Tess should have punched him or one of her sisters goodbye.....something to remember her by Hm, I wonder why Matt's so angry with her Heidi's probably gonna get worried once she finds out that Tess isn't home I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)
And yeah, there were a couple of mistakes in the story. It'd be better if you corrected them before someone reports or something. - My dad will always have visiters over -> visitors - Oh, and mystepsisters maid too -> stepsisters' (you forgot the apostrophe) - "Just making sure you're making lots of noddles for everyone." -> noodles - Damnit! I've been set up!" -> drop the " at the end - "Nonsence! If it makes you uncomftable,... -> Nonsense! and uncomfortable
Haha, they seem to be pretty fond of her crotch xD Probably because they can smell the blood....if she has her period Hm, the only one who doesn't seem to like her, is Shads.... I wonder why.... Hm Tess is probably right and she will see the guys again, pretty soon at that She probably shouldn't tell Heidi about it just yet.... I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)
Seriously, this story seems insanely interesting Haha, her stuff was stolen by Zacky, nice At least they seem like really nice 'dogs', haha Can't wait to see where this'll go I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)