You only have three pages. OK this story deserves much more than that. I love your plotline so far. I love how Gerard hates his brother, father yet still misses them. I like how the mother has that depressed but trying mom feel, and I like how you have kept his fathers identity unknown. And Franks character I like that he is unable to see that Gee loves him so much more than a friend, and I like how Mikey knows he loves Frank, but knows he doesn't deserve him afterall. I just did this so you can know I actually appreciate the story :D see? I was payin attention. Oh and I wanted you to know the grasp I have on the characters. Xoxo killjoy
just, ugh, god, Frank's choices are going to ruin him. Just, what, why, Frank, are you a fucking idiot?! just no, Frank is stupid, dun dun dun duunnnn~
anyways, I likey this chappy :D I mean, seriously, update soon!!! I always wait for this to be update so yeah, hello...
yeah... update soon, lovely chapter, only Frank is making stupid choices and shit. ^___^
This is not good, poor Gerard. This won't end well for him. Ugh, fuck Frank- he should be thinking of his best friend's feeling. I know he's upset, but still- maybe he does deserve Mikey.
oh my god- so many emotions spilled out!!! I love this chapter... I love how Frank gained confidence... and how Mikey has insecurities... they both made a right decision... but I feel like something's gonna happen when Gerard wakes up and shit.
Nah, don't feel scared to relate easily to the people in your stories, in fact it happens to every writer. Their inner demons shine through inside stories, it's just something that's quite normal... And everyone has inner demons, at least you're helping yourself deal with it through writing... right? I mean some people have it all pent up yannor? But anyways chick the chapter! Fuck, that wasss so intense, I love this story just because it's so real... And just the emotions are everywhere! It's fabulous!<3 xxx
I just read this today, and I have to give you kudos-- it's hard to find stories on mibba whose writer's have a bearable writing style, so to find a story I actually like has become quite a challenge for me. But I quite like this, and I do hope you continue. (:
I found this through one of skeletonletters's stories, I'm loving it. I hope you feel better soon and can update this because I can already tell this is going to be epic. I also really like that you put a little photo at the top instead of just plain pov. I got all excited to not just read what was going to happen next, but I liked seeing a new picture too.
I'm so excited that you updateddddd. And I loved the chapter, it was very emotional. Gerard definitely needs Frank and Frank definitely needs to realize that Mikey's a shitbag. I can't wait to see the drama really start to unfold.
Just fucking beautiful, my battery is about to pass out so I can't rant about how goddamned good it felt to see that you'd updated this. It was amazing seriously, I can't wait for the next update <3 xxx