Frank and Gerard, end of discussion. You make this a Frikey and I will dropkick you because Mikey's a prick in this one. AND GERARD IS NICE, OKAY? xD Actually, I'd still like it either way - your layout is wonderful and so is your writing.
I like it! The "Cheese puffs" thing was really funny. And when Mikey said "Geetard" it was mean, but for some reason it made me laugh. Poor Gerard :'( Write more!!
PLEASE KEEP IT! i really think this story could be an amazing one so please keep writing :3
Oh, btw. I really like that you put a little picture to show who's pov it is! Just something I thought of reading 'Bury Me In Black' and then I saw it here too so I just figured I'd tell you ;D anyways, please keep writing!! I've subscribed and yeah, I'll be waiting for the email saying there's an update for this, haha! No but seriously, I would love you to keep it! xoxo