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Can you update soon please?

Oh hey... if there are future chapters of this written... why aren't they being posted?! HEY! I'M DYING OVER HERE! What happened to you? Are you okay? Whussup?

Robin is so cute. Yes he is.
And Jace is just the one person that most people dislike but admire at the same time. xD

Hehehehe. Oh Jace. :)

I love Robin. he's so cute. and Oh Jesse, you plotting, conniving little thing. :P

Hyla wins.

I can't decide who's point of view I like reading better. I think it depends on my mood. I'm excited for the next chapter because there surely had to be some Robin-Jace talky talky.

Comment five, of five.

I see where this story is going. I like the idea. I want to have a scene where like, Robin gets beaten up by some fuckhead in the locker room and he's just chilling there alone after with a blood nose and then ta-da, Jace appears and helps him and they sit and have a chat and I love this story, so much in fact, that I abandon my normal English skills when commenting on it.

Comment four.

You know when you read a story and you're like 'man, I wish I was in this story'? That is how I am with this. I want to save them both from their sadness and unite them and there will be rainbows and bunnies and kittens and sunshine and angels singing.

Comment three.

You are good at proof reading your work. This is good because I don't like when people post things that are full of spelling, grammar and syntax errors. Winning.

That was comment one, this is comment two.

Needs more Jace-Robin interaction. I am impatient.

Does it count if all 5 required comments come from me? You didn't specify and you can't change the rules now! Haha. Victory.

I like Robin. He's sweet without being like, fake, like a lot of the 'socially awkward gay kid' characters are around here.

MORE PLEASE. Things I like about the story: It has a lot of layers to it, and I think that totally works. It makes it really interesting. Constructiveness: I have come across no spelling errors or any obvious grammar or syntax errors, so it's all good in the hood. Make sure you click 'preview' before submitting to check if things you want to be in italics are, and things you don't aren't. Future hopes for the story: I want Jace and Robin to connect soon. Hang out. Love each other. Awkwardly. SO MUCH LOVE.

History is good. But peer pressure is no good D:<

Oohh, Jace gave in to peer pressure. Which resulted in him being like he is now, so it seems.
Poor Jace.
Once relationships are broken it's hard to get back together. Sucks for him.
Love this!

I absolutely love the way that you write. I know that I tell you all the time, but it's just so descriptive without having to keep going. I admire that so much and you'll go so far with it. :) I hope that you get this published because I would love to see it in print. The characters are so real and I love them lots.

<3 you! :D!!!

You didn't tell me that you posted this already!!!!! XP!!!!!
But I love them both, which you know very well. :) I'm going to go and read it now :) Yay! happiness! :D

I love it... it made me smile and I think it is incredibly cute how robin is

Oh Robin :P sitting by Jesse and she-who-seems-like-she-needs-a-brick-to-the-face. This chapter amused me, especially the end.
And if you update when we want . . . all I ask is you don't leave us on a cliffhanger for a year D:

Ahh, now Robin has found out Jesse. And Jesse just as annoying as Jace then. No way. :)
And ouch, Psycholohy Robin, psychology. D:
Love this!

So I believe you should update this cause your stories are like a crack addiction and I would really like to read more.

"a snowball of Hate rolling down a steep hill, growing bigger and bigger with each rotation" <--LOVE THAT. It stuck out and I was just like . . . that's amazing. Interesting image.
Jesse seems like a sweetie pie and it's interesting seeing Jace from outside his and Robin's heads. Kayla still seems like a bitch that needs to get taken down a peg.