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  • Mr. Darcy

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    Wow....the side of the other brother. Good two-shoes. Kinda see why Jace don't like him...but still.
    Realistic talking there from Jace, but still, that's hurtful to his brother, no matter what. :/
    Love this.
    February 27th, 2011 at 11:19pm
  • xxNeverAlonexx

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    You should totally update.... I love this story. Its really cute
    February 27th, 2011 at 05:07pm
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    I like the little interaction between Jace and Kayla, she's one of those girls I feel like I would hit in the face with a crowbar after awhile... o_o (if it was intentional for her to see like a total bitch, you succeeded :D)
    And I want to squeeze Robin because he sounds effing adorable!
    I love this story as a whole, though!
    February 27th, 2011 at 05:34am
  • sweet_blasphemy

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    Kay, so, the whole "beacon of hatred" thing, I misread it as bacon. Bacon of hatred. I'm dumb xD
    Anyway, I kinda had a feeling it was him D: He needs to get off the drugs. AS IN NOW D:
    February 23rd, 2011 at 08:26pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Ohmygod, it's Jace! ...annd Kayla, and I dunno why, but she reminds me of the Kayle from I'm A Celeb last year. So I can see 'BITCH' on her forehead. :P
    Such nice brother, actual realistic brothers there. :/ Lol.
    Love this thus far! xD
    February 23rd, 2011 at 08:22pm
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    Are you gonna post the rest of this? Cause if you don't, I would be happy to spam you until you do.
    Cause I reaaaaaaally liked it.
    On a side note, who was the one doing to drugs? Cause I needa know Dx Not really, I'm just impatient.
    February 23rd, 2011 at 07:42pm
  • RiverStyx

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    love it!
    February 19th, 2011 at 12:53pm
  • rememberXme

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    i think his sister is awesoem! :)
    cant wait to read more
    February 18th, 2011 at 09:19pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    The whole pyjama thing, I still don't get why boys wear just boxers in the winter, when I'm freezing my butt off under my PJs, a quilt and a blanket. :/
    His sister seems so sweet to him, bless 'er! :D
    Love this!
    February 17th, 2011 at 12:16am
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    Woah, the whole last bit, I have a feeling it may be Jace seeing as I can't see Robin doing it, but then Robin could be that end person, because then looks and personality can't tell you whether they would do stuff like that.
    And the whole year thirteen being the top, man they think they own the place and think they can get away with trashing the common room at my school, loads have been kicked out and having to pay for it. Lol.
    I find it cute how Robin (might have been) was picked up by his mum. xD
    Love this so far!
    February 16th, 2011 at 09:01pm
  • rememberXme

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    hmm... interesting chapter.
    the last part has me worrying though, if that was jace or even robin! :O
    but yeaaa, looking forward to the next update!
    February 14th, 2011 at 02:42am
  • rememberXme

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    i likeeeeeee it so far :)
    robin is adorable.
    cant wait for the next update.
    February 12th, 2011 at 01:50am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Naww, Robin's so cute! :D
    I like how this has started, the words used and how they flow together and everything. It's pretty cool, and interesting to read.
    This is your NaNo piece? I failed mine...only write 1,000 words. lol.
    But I can't wait for more to see how this, and Robin's cuteness, progresses. xD
    February 12th, 2011 at 12:39am
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