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  • Nytestalker

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    Fuck. An update? I must be dreaming :P
    Anywhoo, lovely update.
    Kinda upsetting at the end but I like how realistic it was.
    I mean, what are the chances that they'll make it?
    But I guess his brother did...only that was a girl....
    Either way. Nice update.
    Do so again soon?
    April 5th, 2011 at 02:13am
  • celeste

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    i love this!
    8)
    April 5th, 2011 at 02:12am
  • coolchessplayer

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    i really liked this chapter i like it when you update for me... it makes life enjoyable.....
    April 5th, 2011 at 01:43am
  • floe239

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    I read chapter 1 and I was just shaking my head and not for the bad reasons.
    I read the summary and I'm thinking "This'll be the best! Racism and forbidden love! I bet the main character is initially sympathetic!"
    But, the first chapter differed that initial idea and I liked that. I liked how sort of up in your face and ignorant it was. Very cool writing, I'll keep reading
    April 5th, 2011 at 01:23am
  • BlindedbyLight

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    Yes...that was a way way way to long of a wait for this story xD
    I love it.
    More please.
    And soon!
    April 5th, 2011 at 01:17am
  • Bubbleloveworld

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    i would hate to live in that place
    April 5th, 2011 at 01:06am
  • garrett hedlund;

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    i love this interracial story and it's a slash to so you just gave us to major controversy's in the world in one story i love it and i love you creativity in the story . !
    March 31st, 2011 at 04:45am
  • celeste

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    hmm...wht shall happen now?
    i loves this story! even though its all racist and stuff...sad sad times...
    March 28th, 2011 at 11:00pm
  • Deebee

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    - This Is A GREAT Story. You're A GREAT Writer. Can't Wait For More , LOVE It.

    =) =) =)
    March 25th, 2011 at 05:52am
  • saving.grace

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    oh my goodness! you can't leave me hanging like this!
    March 25th, 2011 at 04:50am
  • vae vae

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    my love 4 troy is just adding up each chptr
    update ASAP ^_^
    March 22nd, 2011 at 03:59am
  • loveislouder

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    oh Troy...boys are so dumb...
    March 21st, 2011 at 09:32pm
  • Miyral

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    What is Troy thinking!? Why couldn't he just listen to Liam's warnings! I really hope he doesn't get into too much trouble. Can't wait for more! <3
    March 21st, 2011 at 03:49am
  • Nytestalker

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    Why was Troy so mean to Liam?
    It was seriously terrible and it made me want to hurt him
    I mean, especially if they're going out he shouldn't be that mean.

    And he should have known better than to back-talk to a teacher especially at that assembly.

    Please fix this! <3
    and update soon.
    I really missed this this past week.
    March 20th, 2011 at 09:02pm
  • celeste

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    LOVE THIS!
    March 13th, 2011 at 09:00am
  • Nytestalker

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    I almost cried tears of joy when I saw this in my inbox.
    That's a sign that this is one of my all time favorites.
    Which it is. I really really hope that you don't take forever updating the next chapter!
    Just kidding. As long as this story stays awesome (which I'm positive it will) I can live with weeks in between updates. Though I prefer not to <3

    I hope that this doesnt backfire on them.
    So far things are going great and I love that.
    I kinda see some shit about to happen though qithyhe cops and everything.
    Hopefully it doesn't get too bad. I love you and I love this and I love you.
    An I already said that but I just love you that much.
    March 13th, 2011 at 03:48am
  • loveislouder

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    hahaha I love your author's note thing: "Oh my dear God."
    and Troy and Liam are just tooo cute! I'm kind of concerned about the whole school situation though... :/
    March 13th, 2011 at 03:48am
  • notrelevant

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    Yeaaaah, I changed my username, because MiniMCR. is the one I used to have a bajillion years ago and I figure that if it's anything else that I'll constantly wanna change it. So it'll stay like this forever and ever.

    Hehehehe :{D They held hands...
    Liam's being quite the little bitch, isn't he?
    He'll get over it.

    I can't believe they kissed in public o.o
    I wonder if anyone sawww! D:
    That. Would suck.
    I mean, it'd be kinda good...I guess...but if their community can't accept black people then OBVIOUSLY their not gonna accept gay people.

    Prediction time:

    I think that something either really good or really bad will happen.

    Sucky prediction, but meh.
    It's all I can come up with.

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    I feel sorry for Troy, though..
    I mean, I'd hate for my sort-of-boyfriend to be ashamed to be seen with me.
    I'd be pretty pissed, too! D:<

    Hm. This is a short comment, I'm sorry! I just have nothing else to say.
    Exceeeept, that I squee-ed when they kissed, out loud.
    :3

    Update soon and I love you. :{D
    March 3rd, 2011 at 02:31am
  • dayday20

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    Really loooove this story, more plzzzz :)
    March 2nd, 2011 at 08:30am
  • celeste

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    i love this story...!
    its different but in a way that makes you want to keep reading 8)
    can't wait for more!
    March 2nd, 2011 at 12:24am