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  • Beauty Fades Always

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    thank god kevin is still there for ian. i just read this whole story. love it. keep writting.
    April 29th, 2011 at 03:09am
  • Skwahdala

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    Zander was NOT crazy >.<
    Just let Ian die in solitude. LIKE HE DESERVES.
    April 29th, 2011 at 02:02am
  • OhCatherineMyCaptain

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    MOAR.
    AND WHY DID HE PULL AWAY?
    That could've been some major sexy time >_>

    xoxocat.
    April 29th, 2011 at 01:08am
  • BananaILoveYou.

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    One word...
    BAGELS
    April 29th, 2011 at 12:58am
  • pink tape

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    thanks god for Kevin getting Ian to eat.
    April 28th, 2011 at 11:53pm
  • ilyuhh

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    I already miss Zander...
    April 28th, 2011 at 10:27pm
  • cannibalistic love

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    im realy love this story :)
    April 28th, 2011 at 10:25pm
  • breakinreality

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    that song is pretty!!!
    kevin make it better!!!
    April 28th, 2011 at 10:24pm
  • hopes anchor

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    This is really, honestly, one of my favorite stories on here :)
    I get really excited when I see that you've updated, haha.
    I've fallen in love with your characters, and I cried when Zander died.
    Absolutely amazing <3
    Can't wait to read more :)
    April 28th, 2011 at 10:24pm
  • littlemisslonely

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    That song is pretty, in some parts at least. :)

    And poor Ian. I honestly did not expect Zander to kill himself. :/
    April 28th, 2011 at 10:21pm
  • OhCatherineMyCaptain

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    NO.
    DON'T WRITE THIS IN ZANDERS POV.
    I'D SOB SO MUCH.
    Please don't.
    I couldn't handle it.
    I cried enough at this.
    <3

    xoxocat.
    April 28th, 2011 at 05:18am
  • breakinreality

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    i cried. i just wanted you to know that. but i liked it, it was a good way of showing zander's thoughts.
    April 28th, 2011 at 04:46am
  • YouCanCallMePisces.

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    I would love to read that in Xander's POV. It would be so interesting. :)
    April 28th, 2011 at 02:41am
  • Hezzarther

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    YOU MADE ME SAD, HOE.
    April 28th, 2011 at 01:56am
  • Skwahdala

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    COS YOU DID KILL HIM RAWR >.< >.<
    Of course you have an army on your side! I count for about ten billion people on my own ^-^
    You already know how I feel about Zander's POV. I might actually like Sparrow XD
    April 28th, 2011 at 01:34am
  • Invalid.

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    NO.
    NO I DO NOT WANT TO GO THROUGH HEARTBREAK IN ANOTHER PERSONS POINT OF VIEW AGAIN.
    DON'T DO IT.
    NO.
    April 28th, 2011 at 12:54am
  • JustKillParadise

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    HELL YEAH BITCH! BRING ON ZANDER'S POV!! IT JUST MIGHT MAKE ME FORGIVE YOU FER KILLING HIM!!!

    (andmakingmecrywiththischapter)
    April 28th, 2011 at 12:34am
  • karin;

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    I'm really bad at this commenting thing because I never really know how to express my feelings.
    I really liked this chapter. I love how it shed some light on how Zander felt about Ian
    Also, I'm not sure how I would feel about a story from Zander's POV; I'd certainly read it, but it would probably be something I'd end up dropping.
    April 28th, 2011 at 12:30am
  • SomethingLeftToGive

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    Yay for happy endings... though I'm kinda doubting the ability of this story to be truly happy now w/ no Zander=[ Still amazing though! Idk if I'd read Zander's story just b/c I don't think I could read it all knowing that he was gonna die and he could've been happy
    April 28th, 2011 at 12:19am
  • pink tape

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    well i feel so bad for Ian :(
    I wouldn't mind reading some from Zander's POV :p
    (and I hope you find out who did that to your gym clothes)
    <3
    April 27th, 2011 at 11:31pm
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