Us Against The World - Comments

  • kelly09

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    I love this story sooooo much! I check all the time to see if there are new chapters
    June 10th, 2012 at 12:49am
  • RebeccaT

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    He is very rude :( ...... Update Soon :)
    June 9th, 2012 at 05:43am
  • MarriahShadz

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    Wow. Just wow.
    So amazing.
    Finally caught up on the last few updates and damn, I missed so much.
    Looking forward to the next chapter.
    Good luck on your exams.
    June 9th, 2012 at 02:42am
  • Betawolf

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    Please update soon! I love this so much! The characters are amazing and well developed, and the plotline is one of the best ones that I have read in a while :) Keeo up the good work and update soon please! Mr. Green Smile Very Happy Cool Mr. Green Smile Very Happy Cool Mr. Green Smile Very Happy Cool Mr. Green Smile Very Happy Cool Mr. Green Smile Very Happy Cool Mr. Green Smile Very Happy Cool Mr. Green Smile Very Happy Cool Mr. Green Smile Very Happy Cool Mr. Green Smile Very Happy Cool Mr. Green
    June 8th, 2012 at 11:02pm
  • iconik94

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    Absolutely love it!
    June 8th, 2012 at 10:26pm
  • kelly09

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    I'm dying of anticipation.
    June 8th, 2012 at 07:43pm
  • RebeccaT

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    Update Soon please I really like this story
    June 7th, 2012 at 05:37pm
  • kelly09

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    I started reading this and already read all the current chapters! Update soon, this story is addicting!
    May 24th, 2012 at 07:39am
  • Kacen Shea

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    I love the fact that this is progressing slowly, waiting for an update :)
    May 21st, 2012 at 01:07am
  • AH-Pika-Chews-Youh!

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    YOU. MADE. ME. CRY! No jokes! I cried, over the story of Eva Rose!!! And, I even played a guessing game. "-gasp- she's going to get raped!" she gets raped. "WIN. -pause- I am a terrible person". "Oh, she's TOTALLY pregnant!" she falls pregnant. "HA!! YES -pause- I need a life."
    anywhore, the gist of that was, amazing story!
    One teeny tiny little critisim - well, maybe two - Cyrus should have been angrier when he found out she was raped. I mean, it is, after all, partly his fault. Two, their relationship is excrutiatingly slow. that's all. Good. job. keep the updates coming.
    -subsribes. laughs- who needs a life, when I've got Mibba??? :P
    May 10th, 2012 at 07:42pm
  • RebeccaT

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    They finally kissed :) :) update soon
    April 27th, 2012 at 08:37pm
  • tiabear10

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    Absolutely stunning story can't wait for the next chapter
    April 21st, 2012 at 08:12am
  • fearless-forever

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    O my gosh I love this story! I love how you played off the characters and had their relationship develop slowly with the story. It is amazing! And the characters have so much depth!
    Though I feel sorry for evangeline, cyrus will probably avoid her now... :(
    April 20th, 2012 at 05:31pm
  • Anailuj

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    :D AH! CYRUS IS SO HOT SOUNDING.. and I can't wait to see the baby :)
    April 20th, 2012 at 01:27am
  • mebeth

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    Finally!! Yeah. This is a great story. I love the build up and the background stories. Thank you for not having them just jump into bed. The characters have depth and a believablity! Keep up the good work. I would like updates more often but I can understand how a piece this good takes time.
    April 19th, 2012 at 11:59pm
  • temptation;

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    Dear merciful

    I can't even - That has got to be the best chapter by far, in my opinion.

    I can't believe it what I just read
    April 19th, 2012 at 11:08pm
  • temptation;

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    That chapter was incredible and I am absolutely speechless.
    April 17th, 2012 at 05:37am
  • fearless-forever

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    I love this chapter so much. It's so sad, yet so heartwarming. I think I'd feel the same way that she did if that ever happened to me.
    April 17th, 2012 at 03:11am
  • TheWh0rr0r

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    you are an amazing writer! please update ASAP!!!!
    March 22nd, 2012 at 09:57pm
  • temptation;

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    Wow, I'm speechless. I don't know what to say but I knew I just had to comment.

    I love the way you write especially tying the whole student/teacher subject with Eva's rape. Cyrus is my ultimate favorite character, of course, but Ceri on the other hand... I know she cares but I almost wanted to hit her in the face with a chair.

    I can't wait to read more, honestly. That chapter was amazing :)
    March 15th, 2012 at 06:08am