Make Me Better - Comments

This is a great story. I really like it. Please update it soon.

chapter 22 cracked my ass up. Gerard and his cluelessness. lol

Hahahahahahahha omg chapter 22 killed me! Hahaha Gerard was so funny! "Why are they kissing?!"
You, my friend, have talent and that was some of the funniest romantic shit that I have ever read. Props to you and even though I haven't even gotten to the latest chapter, I hope you update because I know I'll be done reading this by tonight! And you've already completed, then make another fanfic because I really love this one!!
Amazing!!!
Lol Gee in Chapter 22 still gets me. Naive, funny, stupid little boy.

I love this so much :3

Hiii! I'm really glad you're back .xx

I'm so sorry for your loss :( one day you'll meet her again, I promise.
And don't worry much about this story, we'll wait for you :)

i'm really sorry for your loss :-( i hope you're doing okay. you're going to be okay.

aw I'm sorry about what happened with your computer :-(

aw i'm both sad and excited that it's almost over. sad because i feel like i've been following this story for so long and excited cause i really want to know how it ends! xo

i like this story a lot. in fact i read all 70 chapters in two days hahaha. i'm just wondering, not that it really matters, but why don't frank and olive ever have other sex? like it escalated really quickly and now whenever they get together they go straight to full-blown sex. i think it would make more sense if they did other things sometimes. but, as i said, it doesn't really matter. great story!

YAY UPDATE!

aaah cute as always

Might be an awkward filler but it was still amazing as always <3

Lol yay they made up!!! XD haha nice move with the whole Mikey Way thing :)

Yay they made up! However, I am interested in the whole Mikey Way situation. Oh my god I would literally die if I were you.

So I had to mention this because you mentioned All Time Low. When I was in 7th or 8th grade(I'm a senior now) they did a concert at my school before anyone knew who they were. I don't know if it was just the acoustics in the auditorium, but they sounded terrible. I think I really need to listen to them again if they're good enough now for MikeyWay to like them XD
Anyway! yay they made up :) Loved the update :)

Lol who put a stick up his ass?

S it like Brian Haner as in Synyster Gates Brian? Oooh Olive's got it goin' ON!!i

ah frank can be so stubborn! i just want slap his face sometimes. keep them updates coming xx

Oooooh they're fighting again. I would have just stayed out of it.