Make Me Better - Comments

i hope olive's not gonna be suspended or anything like that. very excited! can't wait for the next update. :)

Oh snap! Lol what's gonna happen?!?!?!?!?!

I hate it when stuff like that happens. You got stuff going on at home, gotta deal with people at school, and then your significant other messes up and you're pissed with them. Totally a bad week right there

Nice punch, Olive ;)
I was kinda expecting Frank to jump into the bus too. Oh well.
Update soon please!

i love it! oh geez frank messed up pretty bad

Totally saw that coming

oh my god!!!!!

i'm glad to help :) i'm loving the updates! <3

Oh shit I bet he fucked Jenna!

I hope her mom and the baby is okay!
And holy eff, what a cliffhanger :o What did Frank do? I really wish he didn't cheat on her......
Cant wait for next chapter :)

maybe you should have frank fight with cooke again and then frank and olive have a huge fight because he feels like she's always defending him blablbala then they take a break etc etc etc then get back together again lol idk

love it!

Frank you cock block!

PAGE CLAIM.
;D
Anywho.
I love this story :3

I felt that way xD then I decided I would never have sex again.
THEN I wanted to do it all the time.

NOW I want to do it only when we can't and never when we can. XD
All in the span of four months. And then only within like, 6 times. XD

I'm still all "eeeehhhhh don't touch me. It's weird. AH. DON'T LOOK AT MEEEE." XD

I love that Olive's mom didn't flip shit and call her a slut.

*love. Not over. D':

Aw.
:3

I over how you portrayed the after thing. XD
That makes it so realistic.

Half asleep, but holy fucking shit.

Frank's stupid, Cooke's stupid.
XD
But her dad's cool. :)

hmmm . . im gonna subscribe. . . so i dont lose the story:)