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  • glamourxkills

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    Hmm....
    That background choice leads me to believe
    that Trenton and Taylor are going to be hooking up
    sometime in the near future...
    The premise of this story is great, slightly conventional,
    but this secret/blackmail twist is pretty brilliant.
    Can't wait to see where its going!
    March 23rd, 2011 at 05:50am
  • Sunshinechavez5

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    I like the concept of the story but the girl is such a sourpuss can u atleast lighten her up a little I thought kids that have parrents like that are suppose to be perfect when there around but sneaking out their window to go make out with the quaterback football star at night
    March 23rd, 2011 at 04:36am
  • lightinyoureyes

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    I keep having this strange feeling that Trenton and Taylor are going to end up together....they're complete opposites but I think they would make an interesting couple....update....please, I love your stories especially this one!
    March 23rd, 2011 at 04:00am
  • ClaudiaBiedles

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    I like it, lmao :3 Trenton seems so hot. I love his bad-boy attitude, its sexy ;).
    update when you can.<3
    March 23rd, 2011 at 03:32am
  • Love. Hope. Dreams.

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    really?
    i do :D
    hope theres another one in the near future
    March 23rd, 2011 at 03:28am
  • Dominique_Lynn

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    I love this. Keep updating PLEASE. I think Taylor needs to seriously loosen up she's so up tight and FORMAL. She acts like she's like 30 or something instead of a high school girl. I love Trenton though =]
    March 23rd, 2011 at 03:26am
  • KendraSmilez

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    Omg i love this so much (:
    I really hope you update really soon! It's so good.
    March 23rd, 2011 at 03:20am
  • eternity.

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    I love this. :) Trenton is so GJROIGHRSO, gah. I want him and Taylor to get together, already! The anticipation is killing me! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :)
    March 23rd, 2011 at 03:02am
  • trishha

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    I loved the update...can't wait to see how the rest of the party goes!!(:
    March 23rd, 2011 at 02:26am
  • WeasleyWizardWheezes

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    I just gotta say, this would be an epic movie. :D I love this story. Update soon please? :D
    March 19th, 2011 at 04:46pm
  • lightinyoureyes

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    Love the new chapter.....please upddate, I'm getting anxious just thinking about it. Anyways, I love the story. It keeps me entertained.
    March 19th, 2011 at 03:30pm
  • seeing stars

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    love the update as alwayss :D
    March 18th, 2011 at 07:35am
  • Love. Hope. Dreams.

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    i really. really. really like it. :D
    update soon!!
    March 16th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • Sleepless Dreamer

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    love it :)
    March 16th, 2011 at 02:42am
  • heroine .

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    - this is simply amazing! I was hooked once I read the summary then the first chapter! Update soon! :)
    March 16th, 2011 at 12:49am
  • trishha

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    As alwaysss I loveddd the Update..and hurry up and update soon because I wanna know what happens at the bowling ally!!(:(:
    March 15th, 2011 at 11:59pm
  • R.I.O.T

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    AWSOME!
    March 15th, 2011 at 10:57pm
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    March 15th, 2011 at 10:53pm
  • NaiveDove

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    haha id hav killd him update soon
    March 15th, 2011 at 10:49pm
  • seeing stars

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    i cant wait for the next chapter either! :D
    March 10th, 2011 at 06:28pm
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