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  • cuteself22

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    Omg !! The sex scene :) !! I absolutely LOVE it so far. Trenton sounds so dam sexy !! I hope they go through wit everything. UPDATE REALLY REALLY REALLY SOON !! lol
    October 28th, 2011 at 10:29am
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Loved the new chapter! Amazing can not wait till you update again. :-)
    October 28th, 2011 at 07:43am
  • appley92

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    I LOVE THIS.

    ohk, so im only on chapter 4 right? but already i can tell im going to love the rest for multiple reasons.

    one--- your writing style is ahhhmazzzinggg :D
    two--- im bi, and my first girlfriends name was sam...lmao. but she had black hair,,,,,,and brown eyes,,,,,lol.
    three--- its really good!!!

    :D oh btw...im liz :) lol.

    keep writttttinggg!!! <3
    October 28th, 2011 at 05:16am
  • NaiveDove

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    I like the dominating Trenton, its so sexy! Haha And i loves how he wS likes its gonna hurt but i aint gonna quit haha loves this update soon!
    October 28th, 2011 at 03:49am
  • poppinnnn'.

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    I spent most of the time I've been awake reading this. :)
    I love it!
    October 27th, 2011 at 08:43pm
  • neon.band.aids.

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    oh gosh, i wonder if she's actually gonna go through with it :] update again soon! love it!
    October 14th, 2011 at 04:02am
  • alexisxx13

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    o.o updateeeeeeeee
    October 11th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • NaiveDove

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    Ooh I can't wait (:
    October 7th, 2011 at 03:50am
  • KendraSmilez

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    Am I the only dirty fuck can't wait for the next chapter? lol xD Can't wait.
    October 3rd, 2011 at 03:43am
  • The Ants March In

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    "let's blow this Popsicle Stand" hahaha oh my! loved the update :)
    September 29th, 2011 at 02:14am
  • gigibabe972

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    I looooove it! Soooo sexxy! Stop putting the suspense tho! I wanna know! xD
    September 29th, 2011 at 12:38am
  • itscomplicated.

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    oh
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    god
    September 28th, 2011 at 04:08am
  • Jackjohnson96

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    I LOVE this update, I think it's your best so far, or recently! I can't wait to read more, plzzz update again!
    September 28th, 2011 at 03:29am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Great update :D
    September 28th, 2011 at 02:17am
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    I cant wait update soon ; P
    September 27th, 2011 at 06:31pm
  • you're_addicted

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    Oh. And please tell Erica to get her ass back to Fits.
    September 27th, 2011 at 05:08pm
  • you're_addicted

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    oh my God
    pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
    this is my favorite story on this damn website
    i'm begging you
    update soon XO
    September 27th, 2011 at 05:07pm
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    September 27th, 2011 at 08:12am
  • roll_your_eyes_at_me

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    That was cute.... Kinda... If that makes sense... lol

    Oh Erica you idiot NO!!!!!! YOU AND FITZ!!!! Not a fucking random!

    Aww Taylor is so funny.

    Trenton... Damn how blunt is he?! lol

    UPDATE SUPPPPERRRR DUPPERRR SOOOON SONNNN!
    September 27th, 2011 at 05:54am
  • dreamer4life247

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    Oh my gosh thank you so much!!!! That ment a lot trust me! That was a great chapter and your a fantastic writer thanks so much for putting a smile on my face and making my night by updating!!!
    September 27th, 2011 at 05:00am
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