Taming the Beast - Comments

So, I finally gave in and read this story. And I enjoy it.
I really like the relationship between Eclipse and Ruby, and how they care so much for one another.

And for Paul, I honestly don't understand how he could be so mean to Eclipse; especially, when she's his imprint. I would like to see what he was trying to do or what he was thinking at that time. Haha, because that just baffles me.

I also noticed that both of you mostly focus on actions, rather than thoughts. With Eclipse, I don't understand why she's being moody, 'emo' like, because I don't know what she's thinking. All I know is what she's doing. So, it'd be cool if you could try to describe their thoughts more.

In Chapter 7, this part (it's kind of awkward, I'll bold the parts):
"Eclipse is such an amazing and selfless person that you should be grateful that you never know her, she doesn’t have to be here and yet she keeps on coming back because this is where her friends are. She’s puts up with you putting down every chance you get because she cares that much for her friends.”

The first part: are you trying to say that Paul should be grateful that he knows her? The second part: Did you mean, putting her down ?

Above all, I really do enjoy this story. And I want to read more!
I feel really bad for Paul. He was a huge dick to Eclipse, and when he finally gets Eclipse; she goes into a damn coma. Haha. Well, I guess that's what he gets for treating her like crap. Ruby and Seth are so cute, I like them together.

I've recommended and subscribed! (:

oh my goodness!! loved it! very intense chapter lol. cant wait for the next update!!!
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I love this story! Your portrayal of Paul is just so sweet and loveable. He is so nice to Eclipse and I think it’s cute how he asked her if her was nervous. He is just so adorable! I also think Jacob is adorable in this story! He is totally flirting with Eclipse by telling her she looks stunning! I really love that Paul opened up to her and apologized about the things he had said to her before. He’s finally manning up and admitting what he did! And I am so glad that she is forgiving him finally! They are just too cute!

Just caught up again :) Can't wait for more :)

i absolutely love it please keep on updating!!

Pretty dress and nice homecoming :) Can't wait for more :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

so cant wait for more

Awwwwww they are just so cute nd I'm happy she said yes to Paul

Yay!! :) This makes me a very happy bean :) Didn't expect her to kiss him :) Can't wait for more :)

Awww :) So sweet :) Can't wait for more :)

Pure amazingness!!!!!

I have now read the rest of the story, this is reallly good can't wait for more, " Subed "

hi im Karen AKA Kaz i really like this story only read the 1st chapter soo far i like where you have put a picture of her room that is a good way to help us imagine her room please write more relly good x <3

Ooooo. Can't wait for more :)

Aw :) Can't wait for more :)

I'm excited to read more!!!!

This sounds awesome girl :)

I really hope you update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Awesome, i really like it. More please!!!