January 14th, 2012 at 09:52pm
Jagged Edges - Comments
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I feel like I fell off the face of the earth with no Internet! Especially knowing I couldnt read this story! And OMG! Sooooooo much has happened since then!! Not going to go into details since everyone else has already read it...But I have LOVED what has happened!! And I can't believe how much I missed it!! :DJanuary 12th, 2012 at 02:47am
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Lazy is good.
And so are hot boys playing Chicken.January 10th, 2012 at 03:27am -
Yay an update! Loved it as always and congrats on your crush asking you out :) he better not keep you away from this story or i'll have to kill him lol!! :DJanuary 9th, 2012 at 06:04am
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Such a cute chapter. Classic look into the teenage love life. Update soon!January 8th, 2012 at 03:08pm
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this chapter was cute especially the part before Treason falls asleepJanuary 8th, 2012 at 09:20am
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Aww indignant Treason. Amren and L'von bonding!January 7th, 2012 at 08:02pm
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Soo cute (:
These two are adorbale (:January 7th, 2012 at 05:46pm -
D'aweeeeeee. Now, Sexy time! Sexy time!! :DJanuary 7th, 2012 at 05:17pm
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awe the update is so cuteJanuary 7th, 2012 at 04:21pm
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Awww <3
They're so cute :)January 7th, 2012 at 03:57pm -
YAY!!!!
im so glad that amren is back in the storyJanuary 7th, 2012 at 10:01am -
uh oh amren LOL
you're writing is making me sad that I'm single :c
but happy because asdfghjkjgjk.
yeah ._.January 7th, 2012 at 09:09am -
Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. I love this story so much. I'm going to end up dead if this gets any more lovey dovey. My heart can only take so much DX And also, congrats on getting asked out! There's nothing better than finding someone special :)January 7th, 2012 at 08:57am
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They are sooooo freakin' cute!!! Oh and congrats on getting asked out :) The chapter was great as usualJanuary 7th, 2012 at 08:31am
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Honestly? My favotire part of this chapter was 'Jake throws a drumstick at my head in excitement.'
'Caseu that's what everyone does in escitement, throw stuff at people's heads. Okay, it's probably something I waould do, but still. I love this Jake guys. You should includ him more.
And you're not alowed to have two people with kick-ass names play the guitar! You should have had Tripp on drums or bass of something, but no. the two awesome instruments get kyle and Jake. I'd gag but i don't want to wast the enery on this abominationt before my eyes. Greh.
Damn, Treason must have really caem out of the shell. I would have imagined hims to be like "so um... we're going to play a song now." or "So.... uh.... Tripp....." But no! he has this whole fReaking speaks! Damn Gian, you must have some special posion or some shit in your lips to make that happen. It's just like BAM! PERSONALITY!
Spelling? HaHa, no. I don't spell.January 2nd, 2012 at 07:23pm -
the song was cute :3 and Treason is so modest :)January 2nd, 2012 at 02:18am
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Happy new year! And this story is still amazing!
Also, thanks for the new band, I'll be listening to Go Radio now; I needed a new band to obsess about ;)January 2nd, 2012 at 01:57am -
Woo hoo! Happy New Years! Time to parrrrrrtaaaaayyyy! Oh and awesome update even for my jacked up state. hahahahaJanuary 1st, 2012 at 12:22pm
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I love this story so much! It's so good :) keep up the good work!January 1st, 2012 at 08:24am
Haha, are Amern's nipples trying to tell us something? Was L'Von's neck having a bit of a discomfort moment? I think so, so I do think. Like brother like brother. Incest! Nicole, that's probably how they both found out they were gay! Incest! And Amren felt all ashamed and uncomfortable afterwords and he didn't know what to do so he tried to kill himself and got some brain-damage in the process so he didn't remember any of it. And Treason loved his brother so much -in that way- that he tried to follow along and kill himself too put was a complete and total fail and only accomplished messing up his memory too. But Treason knew that something had happened, he felt it, so he built up these walls hoping that no one and nothing could remind him because he knew it was a terrible feeling that belonged to terrible memories and soon, since these fucking walls are gone, he's going to remember his love for his brother and be caught in a heartbreaking battle between the boy he thought he loved that loves him back and the brother he loves more than anything and anyone but doesn't remember what happened and never loved Treason like that in the first place!
Or the cold air could have made Amren's nipples hard and both of the brothers are just really irrational.
Frostbite.