Jagged Edges - Comments

L'Von and Amren are both cutie-pantses.
Just felt like saying that :3

I LOVE L'von, he sounds like one of my family members. Actually, that's my little cousin's middle name except it's spelled LAvon.
You definitely captured the "Do-Not-Fuck-With" aspect of a black mother (I have one, I would know XD) and that's AWESOME.
Treason already sounds like a boss and kinda reminds me of myself when I'm in my chem class. All in all I'm going to have fun reading this story, I know it 8D
Yay for siblings talking at commercials XD

Gian is such a cutie.
L'von is like, my favorite brother character ever now.
He's such a... boy, you know?

whoa
l'evon is gorgeous o;
<3 so cute.

and i loveeeeeeeeeeeed this chapter lol
him in booty shorts.
ROFL

Fuck that, I beat her becasue I leave awesome comments.
haha, all I can think about is if Gian leaned over his ass would be all up in some gay guys face and he'd get a totally boner in the middle of class. Or a straight guy and he'd have to explain that to his girlfriend.
But, just for clarification, the TV is rude! It didn't even say hi back, Stan just walked away like I wasn't even talking! Like Tyrell in 2nd period! People are just so fucking rude today!

I totally forgot about my kitten swastika :3 It was quite a surprise.

Hehehe...booteh shorts. :D

I've never met a navy dad who would allow booteh shorts on their kiddie -- especially their son.

This is crazy good! Can't wait for the next update! :D

That kitten swastika was for Vlad because he is veryvery wrong. I beat him and your sister.

Wanna know why? Because I found a picture of flashing kitten heads in the shape of a swastika. THAT, my friends, beats everything.

Ahem.

Lovely update, sad story.

Caroly~Tiffany; I. BEAT. YOU. ALL. Anyways, I loved it :D It was sad though.

well, I do not lie this. Becasue lying is bad. But I do like this.
Treason sounds so ....dark. Like the devil mixed his sperm with his dad's but most of it burned up in it's own evil and only a little got into his mom's vagina and infected her kid so now whenever Treason dies he will inherit hell. Let's face it, non of our characters are going to haven, they're all too fucked up for that. Even if God ain't even mad (7 times!)

Okay, but we go hard. There may be a bit of blood.

Mike and Vic were in love but Vic still fucked the dealer(in Mike's eyes). Betrayal.
(But just to clear things up, Nicole, I did not read that story. You just told me about it and I was trying to think of someone who cheated that this chicka might know and that was the first thing that popped into my head. And she may or may not know what I'm talking about. Hell, I barely know what I'm talking about.)

^ Touche...
If you two ever are in a lesbian incestuous relationship, I wanna watch you guys.
All. The. Time.

But it could never happen, because Nicole and I are in love.

Hold up! lovers do not beat sisters! It's called incest my love, I could potentially be a lover and a sister. Not that I am, but it's a possibility.
Point: I rule

I knew that L'von was black when I heard 'black bootie bitches'
I have no idea why though.
This is cool though.
Like, seriously.

WHOAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
o;
<3
so cool lol
im so black yo xD i come from the ghettooooo <3
lots of multicultural ppl here in canada xD lol

^ Lovers beat sisters, always :(

Please, I' the most devoted reader/commenter/sister/anything more that that first chick.
"big booty bitches" That was all me beotch! Notice how at the reunion yesterday everyone had a fucking huge ass? Just saying, it was like a guys dream.....if his dream was to get it in with old ladies. Which, now that I think about it, would make a really creepy guy.
This "black talk" you try to put in there is freaking hilarious. I can just imagine this white guy all....wiger like.
Now write the next chapter. I will smother you if you don't (only unlike you I'll remember)

LMFAO CAROLYN ^^^ So funny xD I love her. ANYWAYS, Nytestalker. As you can see, my bff, I'm hyper. So I was all like ifhnvgpuhurfeg READ CHAPTER FASTER! FASTERRRRRRR. That sounded dirty.. Anyways, I loved it <3 Now you have to join the contest I will be posting soon. :D

Still raping, girl.

I think Treason is somewhat attractive, and I think Gian is fudging sexii.
But in the "character section" picture, you can't see his hand, which is supposed to be down his pants :(
Sadface.

Update.
Soon.

I cannot wait, girile.
I'm gonna be the most devoted commenter/reader/lover ever.
Emphasis on the "lover" thing. ;D

I'm currently raping this story with my nonexistent penis.
Waiting for it to come out.

Come out of the closet, Story! Come out!