I CAME AND STARTED READING BECAUSE IT HAS LINKIN PARK SONG \ NAMES. YOU BETTER BET YOUR LIFE I KNOW THOSE SONSA BIZNITHCES LIKE THE BACK OF MY HAND. I LOVE YOU, AND I LOVE THIS STORY. MOREEEEE
I read the first chapter. Promise I'll soon read the rest. Anyway, I like it, it doesn't show much for the first chapter, makes me want to keep reading. Some advice, the reader's thoughts contradict her actions. But that's my opinion.
That little moment between Dezza & James was a little... odd. If something like that happened between me and I guy I hadn't seen for 3 months, I'd probably yell at him. Also, I like the second layout better (:
hmm very interesting chapter an i would have to go with layout number 2 an dannnnggg things were definitely getting heated between james and her XD UPDATEE
I like background 1 better than background 2, but I think you can do better than both of them. Also, really enjoying the story, hope you make more soon!
This is my first time reading this story and I don't like it I love it!!!! I read the whole 22 chapters I started at 12am and now it's what 3:17 am Your a very talented author <333 the story by the way Hope you update soon!!!!!!!