The Pursuit of Happiness - Comments

So amazing!!!:)

Yay, Shannon! He's my fav brother.

The story is great and I love the descriptions you give of their personalities! So, to the constructive criticism...

You spell some words incorrectly, like 'week' when it's supposed to be weak. In some sentences you forget to write a word, but don't worry we readers can understand what you mean anyways. :-)

I'm now a fan of this story and a part of the family you created. Thanks for a good read!

Yessss. He came around :) So willing to read more. Great job so far

Im crying, cause of happiness that your back, and for the chapter!
WHY HELENA, why couldn't you just say OH I LOVE YOU TOO SHANNON!
Dont just leave him hanging!

Lovley chapther honey!
And I hope you dont feel the way you did the last month, cause you write so so sooo good!

Love J

You're back! Yay! I got so excited when I saw that you had updated! And now I'm super excited to see what will happen in the next chapter! Update soon! =] <3

This is too much!! Ayyyayyy...two sex scenes and both from behind. kkoxhocodifjeofj OMG.
The story is coming out so well.. wonder if their relationship will be based just on the lust? We'll see what happens. Update sooon

You tease!
why stop when its getting all hot? o:

Cant wait till next update!!
Love J

-squeals- love shannon

I' ve only just read your first chapter, off to read the next ones haha.
Your style of writing is really great and fluid, and considering English isn't your native language you're doing well
One small thing though - Europe is a continent, not a country. North Europe could mean like Britain or Finland or Sweden, and they all have very different English accents!

This chapter, all I can say is just Aaaaaw! The tomo and vicki part, just aaw!
And at the end when shannon is talking to Miranda, wow.
I have said this before and I will say it again, you can really write. You are so goddamn good at it! Dont ever let anyone say different about that!

Love J

First time of reading a 3stm story. AND I FUCKIN LOVED IT. haha. Also could be because I find Shannon one of the hottest men out there.... Totally don't even care if he is 16 years older than me lol.

Hello there :D I've been reading this story these last days and was ecstatic to come to a new chapter today. I just had the chance to write this to you now, but my week as been all about this story. It's something I can't stop reading. I feel I had read enough stories about Jared, so THANK YOU for writing Shannon :)
I can't stop thinking about this, I like your writing, I like how you use their lyrics so well and so discret. I'll be waiting to know what happens next, I know I would want to tell here all about the details I liked and the ones I didn't like, but! it's late and I gotta go. I just wanted you to know you have a reader that likes to speak her mind here. Take care :*

Sweet mother of Tomo! This was a interesting chapter! There are so many questions! The most important one is: Will Theodore make it? :O
Ahh I can't wait to read the next chapter! ^_^

You know I love you, right?
Will Theodore be alright, is he going to make it? And how will things go for Helena and Shannon when she and Theodore get out of the hospital? If Theodore make it... o:
<3

-J

JSRKBYNFISJRNFVIJERFVESJIFRNVCPEJFR!!!!!
seriously, WHAT DID SHANNON JUST DO?!
AND WHAT DID YOU JUST DO?! YOU CANT JUST STOP WRITING LIKE THAT!

i need, you heard me I NEED chapter 16. NOW!

-J

seriously i need another update soon!!!!!!!!!! grrrrr you always leave it as a cliffhanger

Ah shit! I really need chapter 15! pleaseee dont make me wait too long.. pretty please!
-J <3

this story is sooooo good, cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AAAAAHHHHH!!! WHY YOU DO THIS!? IM HAVING ANOTHER HEART ATTACK!
What the fuck will happen now? will shannon find out? I need chapter 14 NOW!

-J

Cant wait for chapter 13!!
What is Constance gonna say, if Helena telling her about the baby? o:
I love you :3

-J