One of the Boys - Comments

Dam that guy in that pic is hot :D
Love the update cant wait for the next

"He's got a birth defect, or it might have been testicular cancer, anyway that whole bottom half is messed up. Don't even think he can wee straight."hhahahahahahaha!!!! That part made me laugh so hard! Poor Lucy! I love how Marcus is inon it and is actually helping her, I stll feel like her deal with him to keep her secret is going to turn out to be a double edged sword.... and I love how there hasn't been much of Leo interacting with Lucy but I still love him lol

Update soon!

I really love this story. It is hilarious, has me rolling. I'm dyeing of laughter right now. Update SOON!!!
:D

This is just hilarious and I love (and hate) how I can't tell who the love interest is.
Definitly subscibing and I can't wait to read more. =D

Oh dear god.
Teddy is the cutest thing. EVER. <3

XD
"I'm terrified of blood."
XD

He's adorable.
Definitely my favorite character. <3

Poor lucy i feel sorry for her D:
teddy is so cute his like a little baby :D
Cant wait for then next update !

Poor lucy i feel sorry for her D:
teddy is so cute his like a little baby :D
Cant wait for then next update !

:) amazing! I was waiting FOREVER (not really) for this lol evrytime i got a notification the back of my mind was screaming for it to be this story! I literally squealed when i got it just now lol Im a dork
anyways, amazing as always :) I love Marcus I really do! and I swear to gawd Leo is gay with...whats his name, Lucy's guitar playing friend from the dorm (Im sorry I always get the boys confused for some reason or forget their names) or a leats Bi annnnd I have become convinced something is up with Teddy, dont ask why, I just am, weird right?
anyways Back to marcus, he seems soooo sweet and nice to Lucy, but he seems devilish so I hope he doesnt turn out horrible!! I would legit cry, no joke, because they belong togethherr ::)) <3<3<3<3<3
annd I remeber the orientle guy! he was watching teddy get "beat up" and it pissed Lucy off to no end!!!!
anyways update soon, or whenever you can!

:) amazing! I was waiting FOREVER (not really) for this lol evrytime i got a notification the back of my mind was screaming for it to be this story! I literally squealed when i got it just now lol Im a dork
anyways, amazing as always :) I love Marcus I really do! and I swear to gawd Leo is gay with...whats his name, Lucy's guitar playing friend from the dorm (Im sorry I always get the boys confused for some reason or forget their names) or a leats Bi annnnd I have become convinced something is up with Teddy, dont ask why, I just am, weird right?
anyways Back to marcus, he seems soooo sweet and nice to Lucy, but he seems devilish so I hope he doesnt turn out horrible!! I would legit cry, no joke, because they belong togethherr ::)) <3<3<3<3<3
annd I remeber the orientle guy! he was watching teddy get "beat up" and it pissed Lucy off to no end!!!!
anyways update soon, or whenever you can!

:D love this, Usually I'm not a big reader of these types of stories, but you are makin it very original and not at all cliche thus far :) there is no idea of what is to come next, you always keep us, the readers, on edge and in suspense of what is to come :) There is almost no point in even guessing this early in the story with how well you have set this up. I also love how, as you have pointed out, how you make it more of a plot to the story and aren't putting all your effort into it being a love story, but at the same time, letting us know (with the first chapter) that there will eventually be a love story in here, with out giving us a hint as to who it may be (I am not so secretly hoping for Marcus, from the moment he entered the story with, quite literally, a scream). I'm also curious as to who else may find out our little Lucy's secret!!! I looove how Marcus referred to her as his "Little Secret Minx"
Anways, what is a beta? maybe I could help (I often know things but not by name)

cant wait for the next update :D

Yayyy! Another update!
I love where the story is going, Marcus is such an interesting character, I don't know whether or not Lucy should be worried. I think sh eshould be, Marcus seems like he'll hold it over her head or blackmail her to tease her.... hmmmmm
update soon! <3

Oh Marcus. xDD

So this is just a suggestion, but I really think you should make a character page :3 xD
Just saying.

Oh my goodness! What's going to happen next?! I can't wait for the next update! This story is so amazing, I'm so curious to see how Marcus deals with her being a girl and how Lucy is going to deal with him knowing! This is getting soooo good :D

Please update again, really like this.

Wow. He GROPED her. Not sure how to react to that. Haha. Update soon Please!!

Love the story. I can't wait to read more. Update soon!!!!

omg unff! i love this story. the only problem is that there are slight spelling errors, but this story is fantastic! i cant wait for the update

I love this story, but I think you need to get someone to help beta it or whatever, or at least check it before you put it up because there were a lot of spelling mistakes. But I seriously adore this story(:

More of the leo and Cameon x)

I want to know more about the both of then, loved the update cant wait for more