Hunt the Haunted - Comments

:) I'm a bit of a ghost addict. Love paranormal stuff, even though I don't really believe in it. I like this story so far. Clean and focused and not all over the place like most 'wanna-be ghost stories.' Great job:)

I have a ghost story also. It's not like yours but the characters are a bit the same :P
I would love to read more!
hugz&skittles.

[munchkiin]

So far I do like this story, it's good. I like that the title is a song haha and a great song at that.

I can't say much about this since it's just chapter one. I will say a bit though, I like how focused it is. The main character is likeable and realistic. There's the right amount of telling and showing, overall good start to the story.