February 24th, 2011 at 07:12pm
So far I do like this story, it's good. I like that the title is a song haha and a great song at that.
I can't say much about this since it's just chapter one. I will say a bit though, I like how focused it is. The main character is likeable and realistic. There's the right amount of telling and showing, overall good start to the story.
I have a ghost story also. It's not like yours but the characters are a bit the same :P
I would love to read more!
hugz&skittles.
[munchkiin]