Until the Execution's Over - Comments

The way you delve into descriptions and write in detail all the emotions that go along with her binges is amazing. I found myself getting lost in it and relating to her (even though I'm a guy). You had no spelling errors to speak of and the way it flowed was masterful. Keep up the good work!

I miss this! I hope you come back and write some more. I believe I read the previous version.

"And the morning after that October night when she hugged me with tears in her eyes and said, “I just have to do my own thing for awhile, away from all this turmoil, or else I don’t stand a chance,” is a grainy home video seared across my temporal lobe, and I couldn’t hug her back, stone-faced and statuesque, and all I could think was howcouldshehowcouldshehowcouldshe." what a great part and i didnt notice any typos or errors! i'm so excited for the next chapter every time you update i forget how much i love this story and then i read it and it's like holy shit i forgot how much i lvoe this story. wow i think that's the highest thing i've ever said

fuck im so excited for this i cant even properly form a sentence about it jesus christ i love it

GODDAMN i honestly cant handle this shit man but i'm so happy you're finally updating this again and it's perfect and i definitely already notice some changes that you're makin but fuck i cant wait for the next chapter

You are amazing. Your writing is pure poetic beautiful-ness if that made any sense at all and why haven't I read your writing before ahhhhh

I'm so glad this is back!! you're fantastic

jesus christ sam why are you so fucking perfect everything you write sounds like goddamn poetry i love you and i am crying

This is so well written that I don't even know what to say :O Perfect!!!! <3

can my comment for every chapter just be "goddamn" because every time i finish and go to write this out that's all i can really manage to produce because this story's realistic, and great and i love luke and zackariah's relationship and how they're so fucking different about some things but i think that's why they work. i like any time you include his relationship with his mom just cause i think what they have there is really interesting and dysfunctional (and this chapter wasn't shitty), i can't wait for the next one!

Enter my bedroom and when I shut the door behind me, I raise my hands in the air victoriously, silently congratulating myself. Zackariah, you sly fox, you’ve done it again. goddamn i love him and this story, i'm only on chapter three but i wanted to comment because fuck this is probably my new favourite already

Really interesting story. I'm gonna be honest. I made it through the first chapter and I was really impressed. The descriptive language really sort of helps me understand the druggie feeling which is good. so im going to continue now :) good job :)

that toast to jasmine was perfect, it wasn't weird there it was this perfect little scene and i could picture it so easily :* sorry to hear about your friend, take care sweetie

Wow... I feel like shit is about to get a whole lot worse.. I feel like Luke is gunna leave and then Zack is going to spiral down, down, and further down...
Oh, btw, for your layout change, I think you should make the font bigger, but other than that, I love the layout :)

OH MY GOD i totally didn't read chapter fourteen because i completely completely didn't even know that i missed but just i don't even have words to describe how good it was and im so flabbergasted, please never stop writing just oh my god i could cry

this has completely surpassed perfection and i don't even know what else to say other than that i can't believe jasmine died, just oh my god

Nah, I really like this story; it's not bad at all. And I like your layout :)

oh my god oh my god, I read chapter fourteen before I went to sleep and I was thinking "there is so much coke in this story, so much emmy and so many drugs in general, someone is going to get hurt soon" and I had an inkling of who it would be as soon as she took her cardigan off, I couldn't believe it! the way Zack found out as well, thinking it was that other girl! and I read fifteen as soon as I woke up ..... augh this is incredible!!

oh my god oh my god, I read chapter fourteen before I went to sleep and I was thinking "there is so much coke in this story, so much emmy and so many drugs in general, someone is going to get hurt soon" and I had an inkling of who it would be as soon as she took her cardigan off, I couldn't believe it! the way Zack found out as well, thinking it was that other girl! and I read fifteen as soon as I woke up ..... augh this is incredible!!

This is actually amazing. I love the layout it is nice and simple. I felt that the summary was very interesting, and it really made me want to read more. The characters all seamed very real. I found that I was able to connect with Cecilia for some reason. I also barely saw any mistakes what-so-ever great job. C'est super!