Until the Execution's Over - Comments

...How does this only have 13 comments and 16 Subscribers? D: This is brilliant... amazing... thank you so much. It's so hard to find an original story that makes you want to just keep reading. I'm sooo happy I found your story <3 I'll be impatiently waiting for your next chapter :)

so perfect i think i might cry and bask in how good this actually was

you're brilliant

All in all: perfect job, well done!
Also sorry for the comment spam :$ <3

Holy shit you really got skills. I love how you reflect on true & real relationships. Like when Zach was so proud of Luke when he got his diploma, how selfless he was and was just truly happy for him. Or when Luke's parents invited along Zach too just because they'd know how much this would mean for their son. Or when luke's fam gathered together and I think somewhere deep inside Zach kinda wishes he had a family like luke's. Even though nthey are not billionairs but a bit more 'normal', caring and close to each other. Well I could be totally wrong but I feel like zach's parents and money have a huge part in zach's fucked up life. You have a way with describing emotions so perfectly, I could releate to zach's anger so much. The way you showed how betrayed/disappointed he felt. Man i started feeling sorry for the kid. How alone must he felt, everyone just 'leaves' him and that sentence reflecting on how the drug, emmi is the only girl in his life that he can love and stuff. Ok well I stop babbling now, I'm just like so mesmerized by the chapter. So quality. Also perfect grammar no typos, nothing. Just flawless. Yeah I really stop now, sorry if something doesn't make sense that I wrote but I can't read it back/see what I'm writing cuz my phone keeps freezing and being all weird ::/ <3

Sweet baby jesus. Everything that went down in the last chapter. Omg.

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Wahh all u lazy ass ppl have to start commenting so we can get new chapsss <3

Just finished reading all the new chapters. Wowww I'm head over heels for this story. I enjoyed getting a look into Zack's parents' conversation, how they argued, how they blamed each other and still refuse to be an adult who is there for their children.
Forgot to mention, I like how u createad that fictional drug. I love stories that maintain a sense of realism but stay original. And you have the perfect ability to do this. Well done:)))

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I made your morning??? YOU made my day with the new chapters! You girl a hella fast updater!

I'm really interested in this! So curious where you'll go w the story line! Finally an original story, amazingly written :)

This is really good. Can't wait to read more.

Wow. This is really cool.
I like how its written.
Amazing.
I loved it. :P