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  • hachie

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    So Sakura has met his parents and they love her! I bet she was nervous as hell but probably a huge relief that Brian's parents has accepted her. And now Brian getting dirty thoughts with Sakura so close! I look forward to the next update!
    February 13th, 2013 at 02:22am
  • pinkpanther012895

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    I AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU UPDATED! :) Cant wait for the next one.
    January 21st, 2013 at 04:37am
  • PhoebenPaige

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    Love love the update! Def cant wait for more.
    July 31st, 2012 at 11:33am
  • Star Angel

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    Love this please update soon
    July 31st, 2012 at 12:19am
  • hachie

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    So Brian has met her parents but it failed for her father because of how Brian looks! He is the total opposite of what her father sees that is suppose to be for his kids. That is really messed! Her father spending more time with her brothers instead of her. He is going to regret ever treating her that way because she branching out and beginning her life. I can't wait for the next update!
    July 30th, 2012 at 11:06pm
  • JustThinking

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    Hehe, it came to you ^.^ I always think of some funny accented voice, when I hear that sentence.. Not really sure why... xD so Brian met and won over one parent? Well 50/50 is better than 100/0.. So yeah... Loving the romance and more drama you say? Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for this and how this ending that came to you will go.. When the story comes to that.. Good chapter. Very Happy
    July 30th, 2012 at 09:25pm
  • avenging angel

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    Jeez for a dad that's never there and a brother that's just like the dad they sure do care about Brian dating her lol! And that think her dad won the ice king award he was so argh!!! When she intro Brian! But either way I loved it!!!:) Bri has her mom down! I can't wait to see where you take this!!!great update!:)
    July 30th, 2012 at 08:31pm
  • germaniaiturra

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    please! update one more chapter!! or i'll die D:
    July 30th, 2012 at 06:48am
  • JimJams90

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    Don't end it here!!!!!! X
    July 25th, 2012 at 06:10pm
  • Star Angel

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    aw so good love this cant wait to see what daddy dearest has to say lol i would be like screw you daddy lol update soon
    July 25th, 2012 at 08:48am
  • hachie

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    Awwww I just wanted this story to end right here where Brian and Sakura kiss for the first time! I turned to goo when kissed her first to stop her from babbling! I know it won't be easy now since they are going to have because of who her father is and definitely the age gap between them. I can't wait for the next update!
    July 25th, 2012 at 05:11am
  • avenging angel

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    Phew For a second there I thought Bri wasn't cling at all!!! But I'm happy he did and he kissed her!!!:0 wow lol great update!!:)
    July 25th, 2012 at 02:03am
  • JustThinking

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    Well that makes sense and no this wasn't over the top at all. You hit that fine balance just right and I love you for it. At least right now x) so they are made up? Awww!! I wonder how you will tie this up and end it. Such a good story. Hmmm.. Another good chapter. Smile uh! And recommended!! Very Happy
    July 25th, 2012 at 01:41am
  • shasha24

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    I'm so happy that Brian forgave her. I thought he wasn't going to come. This chapter brings me so much joy. They are such a cute couple. Waiting for the next update. Cry
    July 25th, 2012 at 12:11am
  • hachie

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    So now Gena and Val want to sit down and have a very serious talk with Sakura because in some way they feel betrayed when they found out that Sakura comes from a very rick family. But I bet if Sakura tells them the whole truth everything will be alright because she bonded with everyone except for a stuck spoil bitch! That wants all the attention to go to her! I can't wait for the next update!
    July 19th, 2012 at 07:50am
  • Star Angel

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    Love this please update soon
    July 9th, 2012 at 10:52am
  • I'm Your Apocalypse

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    I hope Gena and Val see what Sakura has to deal with and gets Brian to see it to and then he stops being so stubborn and realizes he really loves her!!!!!!
    July 8th, 2012 at 05:07pm
  • JustThinking

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    Okay, so I'm new to the story and so far I really like it. I find it realistic and that's a big plus for me, after some not so fortunate stories.. Anyways, I like the writing style of this, it just fits and I like the detailing, it's just the right amount at hte right times. It's also well written and I like the characters. how they are portrayed, build up, develope through the story and how they interact with one another. I could see this happening, see these people in the real world (or the likes of them).. hmmm... I think the concept is pretty original, at least to me. oh and I like the time line, events, twists and plot line so far. It's dramatic, but not over the top, like it easily could have been. hmm.. now wondering what will happen next, with this talk and all.. all in all, I really like this story so far, I'm subscribing and I'm looking forward to more. Smile
    July 8th, 2012 at 02:01am
  • avenging angel

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    :o I hope. Val and gena aren't to mad at her! But I really want to know what happens next!! Great update!!:)
    July 7th, 2012 at 10:57pm
  • hachie

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    It's understandable that Brian would react that way because he bonded with Sakura. To find out that she comes from a wealthy family and she ran away, and he was used because she didn't feel loved. But with time, Brian will see that he and eveyone else has made her happy beyond belief. I can't wait for the next update!
    June 13th, 2012 at 01:15am