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  • I'm Your Apocalypse

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    Yes, you updated!!!! Loved it!
    January 30th, 2012 at 09:31am
  • AnyaMai

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    Happy to say that you have a new fan! -points at self-
    Found this story a few hours ago, and I just finished reading it all. And I'm loving it :3
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
    -subscribes-
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    January 28th, 2012 at 10:24pm
  • hachie

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    Aw Brian is starting feel the attraction toward Sakura.
    The tingling feeling he gets when she touches his hand and how her laughter brings joy to him, just seeing her happy makes him happy.
    Brian seeing Sakura in another light other than the sweet girl that he is taking care of! X3
    Hmmmm maybe her father or older brother will see her with the guys and try to take her back home?
    Or Chelsea will do something stupid again to try and get back at Sakura.
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 28th, 2012 at 03:44pm
  • Aurielle

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    Great chapter! Her and Brian would be cute together, and im guessing that the trouble is her dad coming back into the picture or Chelsea figuring out who her father is and who she really is and all that stuff.
    January 28th, 2012 at 06:31am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Great update honey.
    January 28th, 2012 at 04:54am
  • PhoebenPaige

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    I love this story cant wait for more. :D
    January 17th, 2012 at 05:52pm
  • Synyster Gates;

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    I love this.
    December 31st, 2011 at 04:34am
  • DontEatMyCherries

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    Just read through all chapters and I absolutely love it! :)
    Looking forward to reading your next update ;)
    December 29th, 2011 at 07:46pm
  • shasha24

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    Such a cute chapter. I love how close they are getting.
    December 22nd, 2011 at 02:06am
  • emawamaborg

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    i love it post soon!!!!!!!!!!
    December 21st, 2011 at 12:52pm
  • McKenna Haner

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    Gotta love Gena. She's like a mommy.
    I love her new hair, I wish I was bold enough to go for orange hair!
    Update soon!!!!
    December 21st, 2011 at 04:26am
  • hachie

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    So Gena can see very clearly that Brian has more feelings for Sakura than he lets on.
    His actions speak louder than his words because he is very protective of her and he will do anything to make her smile.
    Like guy the most expensive bike she use to have and he just being there for her.
    I am still iffy about Chelsea just because her family has money and she can have anything she wants and then she starts to act out when someone reprimands her.
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    December 21st, 2011 at 03:32am
  • Aurielle

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    Ah I looved it. Their cute together and their not even together.
    December 21st, 2011 at 02:40am
  • Drop_DeadM

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    Your story is amazing, and I know this is going to be so annoying but I noticed in the last line you used a 'your', omg, I would so hit me right now if I as you but you used the wrong 'your', it's meant to be 'you're'.
    Sorry again, that just frustrates me, but seriously great story. Update soon! xxx
    December 21st, 2011 at 02:29am
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Thats so messed up what they did with the hair.!!!!!!!!! I remember that happening to that little girl in that movie remember me. that's so mean . great chapter btw :)
    December 20th, 2011 at 05:30am
  • rawrwonderland

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    OH SNAP :O Was not expecting that
    December 19th, 2011 at 09:07pm
  • jessicajackdaw

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    wahhhh so sly! good update though, I wanna know what he's gonna do!
    December 19th, 2011 at 04:13pm
  • XxWishxOnxAxStarxX

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    Wow I can't believe that they did that to her I hope Brian does something.
    December 19th, 2011 at 05:15am
  • McKenna Haner

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    Bitch. I hope you know I hate you Chelsea
    December 19th, 2011 at 04:33am
  • Aurielle

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    Girls are so fricken cruel
    December 19th, 2011 at 02:45am
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