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  • zillyboo

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    Love love love love love!
    July 18th, 2011 at 03:00am
  • xstoriesyettounfoldx

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    So I just found this story and read all 30 chapters in the past two days. It is absolutely without a doubt fantastic. I feel for Isabelle so that I may have teared up when her leukemia returned. This story is just written beautifully.

    Hands down, without a doubt, Emmy is my favorite character, but Tyson is a close second. I love Tyson and Izzy's relationship. It's fantastic, and it was shown perfectly in two scenes: the time Tyson took Izzy bowling and when Tyson was crying at the piano that one night. So beautiful. I love Emmy though because she's so sweet, but fiesty. And I loved the little ~confrontation Izzy and Emmy had right after Izzy informed them she was sick. When Emmy told her not to be so stupid, that they were her friends, etc. It was a perfect reaction for Emmy.

    I love Izzy and Garrett too, of course. I mean they just have a perfect relationship. Garrett is so good to her, but not unrealistically so. The scene in the hospital showed that.

    Okay this comment has gone on too long, haha. In short, this story is beautiful and now I cannot WAIT for the next update. :)
    July 16th, 2011 at 06:41pm
  • revenge_is_mine

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    aww :( this was sad, but you are an amazing writer
    July 15th, 2011 at 02:56pm
  • revenge_is_mine

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    aww :( this was sad, but you are an amazing writer
    July 15th, 2011 at 02:56pm
  • OctoberA7X

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    No!!!! No more sadness please!! she is so misunderstanding the situation!!!! She isn't gonna die!!!!! She isn't gonna die she isn't gonna die she isn't gonna die she isn't gonna die she isn't gonna die she isnt gonna die she isn't gonna die…I'll say it as many times as I need to!!!
    July 15th, 2011 at 12:46pm
  • SweetPea

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    Izzy is gonna die isn't she.......:(. I'm gonna cry.
    But I'm so in love with this story.
    July 15th, 2011 at 09:34am
  • How He Loves

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    This story is soooo adorable!!! BUT IZZY CAN'T DIE!!! SHE CAN'T!! T__T I'd feel too bad for Garrett! They deserve a chance together!!!
    I love your writing style, too! It's addicting, and your grammar is great! (lol sorry, I'm a total nerd) UPDATE SOON OR ELSE!! :P
    July 14th, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • disappearing act.

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    I really love Garrett. I hope Izzy can see now that Garrett will help her through everything and that she keeps her promise and doesn't run anymore.
    July 12th, 2011 at 10:23pm
  • OctoberA7X

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    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! it's about freaking time they got together? i love this chapter and i love this entire story!!!! I just hope very much that she doesn't die! :( that would suck so badly!!!
    July 11th, 2011 at 06:01pm
  • liar's lane.

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    Oh gosh, I just found this story and I read it all in one night. First let me say that you are a wonderful writer. You know exactly how much to describe and how in order to prevoke emotion and your dialogue is so entertaining. I love how Tyson takes care of her so well, he's the perfect brother. John and red are the funniest things, always makin me laugh, and I love Emmy. She truly is the epitome of a teenage girl, especially with her boy drama.
    Last but not least, Garrett is perfect in this. I love when he said he was only mad at her for not telling her about her dance recital, I seriously got butterflies.

    And, I most definitely did the ugly cry/sob when she told everyone she was sick. It was so beautifully written.

    This is definitely one of THE best stories I have ever read on this site.
    <3 Ketely
    July 11th, 2011 at 10:40am
  • Vivid Dreams

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    I love the greatness that is this story.

    She got her parents back and it's kind of sad that it takes her almost dying to do that.
    July 11th, 2011 at 08:31am
  • SweetPea

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    I missed THREE chapters for some reason:/
    Gut I love them all>:D
    July 11th, 2011 at 07:06am
  • vintage hearts;

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    LAKSJDFALKSJFKDSFJ

    I sort of hate myself, because I completely bypassed the last part of your chapter before that where she hits her head and falls. Honestly, I have no idea how that even happened.

    So, because of that, I was seriously panicking upon starting this new chapter. Seriously panicking= practically hyperventilating. Just saying.

    Now, I seem to love the mother. Seriously. You totally changed everything and she's really pulled through for Izzy! I really, really admire that :) Pulling off the hospitalization date was very, very sweet of her. Though I'm very afraid something bad will happen- it'll seem like.... doomsday or something, you know? The opposite of a kick-off I suppose. :3

    Tyson! I just love that boy. I'm so glad he's back- and to hear her piano recital and everything! I can't wait to find out what happens and how that might play through their sibling relationship.

    The friends come in!!! So glad, so glad. That really means a lot, I would just love to be in their flood of friendship seriously. To be so connected, its such a gift! I'm glad they're all upbeat and hopeful and IZZY'S A BRO -w00t.

    The moment Garrett was even mentioned, the biggest smile just flooded on to my face.
    Then when they got the room to themselves again.

    Okay- her apology was so sweet. I've found that personally, I'm practically incapable of apologizing ever to anyone and I always wonder how people manage to do it. But she did it so well, pushing through. AND THEN HIM.

    He can't get any more perfect.

    Garrett is perfect.

    Beyond perfection.

    Whhyyyyyy do you doooo this to meeeeeeee.

    She should have only apologized about the recital- how sweet is that? HE IS PERFET CAN I HAVE HIM PLEASE. I got tears in my eyes, no lie, because that was so unbearably sweet.

    Then the kiss. THe kiss. the passionate unforgettably sweet kiss. alsdkfjaskldfj no words.

    He is truly one of a kind. This boy has no flaws. What have you done. This is just so ugh beautiful and perfect and it kills me. He accepts her choice- that is so, so important! Although I hope, at least most of the time, she doesn't push him away.

    if she pushes him away, I'll take him! forever. please.

    beautiful and awesome

    <3
    July 11th, 2011 at 06:57am
  • TotallyyClaudia

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    I'm in love with this. <33333
    July 11th, 2011 at 04:59am
  • unlove

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    Poor Izzy! D: I hope she gets through all of it..alive. I wonder how Garrett feels about her sickness. Please update soon!
    July 10th, 2011 at 10:12am
  • koobyloob

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    You uh, just succeeded at making me cry... Haha.
    Good job!
    July 10th, 2011 at 09:45am
  • flippinjeans

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    Just found this story! Glad I did. Very well written and I hate cliffhangers, so thanks for that. Keep up the great work!
    July 10th, 2011 at 05:52am
  • revenge_is_mine

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    WOAH drama. this was good though. i like how no one's mad at her. i love garrett. i love this story
    July 9th, 2011 at 05:05pm
  • bria22

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    AWWWW That was so good! Can't wait to see what happens. I vote for Kennedy!
    July 9th, 2011 at 09:57am
  • disappearing act.

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    That hurt my heart to read!
    & I vote Kennedy story!
    July 9th, 2011 at 09:39am